| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 22:04 PDT
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I am sorry about your niece of the heart. You and her family have
my deepest sympathy. I feel a bit of a car to have enjoyed these
chapters so much after that. But I am going to review them and let
you know how much I appreciate your work. I enjoyed seeing Charity
and Ben getting so close, very nicely done. I am feeling even more
sympathy for Kyouhai. He is in such an impossible position. And
then poor Charity gets drugged and her babies stolen. Do they even
know she is Toga's daughter? I doubt it, they would have had a
better plan if they did. At least I hope so. I loved that Toga knew
something was wrong with the twins before Ben did. I feel a little
sympathy for Hecht but not much, he should have thought it through
more before he took the babies. He now faces the most dangerous
creature in the world, an angry mother defending her young and
trained by Inuyasha. I wonder if there will be much left by the
time Toga and Ben get there.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 16:35 PDT
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Oh no... I'm so sorry hun. My prayers are with you. And Ben better
get his ass back and quick..
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2017 15:32 PDT
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My condelences Sue. Talking about what I enjoyed about the chapter
seems irrelevant in the face of your news. Nevertheless I
appreciate you posting the chapter and all the hard work that went
into it.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2017 15:14 PDT
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Finally,finally,fina lly. I'm so happy that Ben just came out with
it. Though at the same time due to the impending danger highlighted
by Kyouhei's injury I find myself tallying who would be able to
fight if it came down to it. Mikio would feel like such a burden if
he knew. Plus there are so many young babies and children to
consider and protect. So many threads to weave together, I'm
looking forward to wherever you're taking us Sue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2017 09:51 PDT
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I am glad that Ben finally told Charity that he wants her as a mate
but I still think she is going to be furious that he didn't confide
all the trouble to her. I am looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2017 15:25 PDT
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L.o.l. Charity is beginning to remind me of Gin. Nice young men
indeed. The insight into Ben's parents in this chapter really
reveals why he left. Though I wonder if his 'abandonment' gave them
reason to become even more volatile and restrict Kyouhei more so
than they did with Ben. I'm looking forward to seeing what the nice
5 days bring in the Fruition universe. Thanks Sue.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2017 08:06 PDT
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I LOVE your final thoughts. I doubt that Charity would be so
charitable if she knew one of those "nice young men" was after her
babies. I loved the toy descriptions and Ben's thoughts about them.
I do feel sorry for Ben's brother though. I hope it all works out
best for him and his friend.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 11:46 PDT
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Yay! Yay! Yay! Unexpectedly, Manami in for the save. I can't wait
to see what happens next with Ben and Charity (I'm choosing to
ignore the impending danger for now).
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 07:49 PDT
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Nice explanation from Manami to help clear the air. I loved the
final thought from Charity. I hope everything works out quickly for
them before Charity finds out Ben lied about needing to be in
Mexico, then Ben will have a leg up to get her to forgive him.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2017 05:26 PDT
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Hey sue if I have to sum my review up into a quick thing it would
be that I loved the final thought for this chapter lmao! I'm glad
charity can start to move forward now because she and Ben are so
cute. Btw I got the stories! Thanks! Can't wait for tomorrow's
chapter. I'm heading back out to see so hopefully the internet is
up so I can read it.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2017 13:24 PDT
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Hey sue this chapter was really sweet. I love the progress and the
back story we are getting from Ben. On another note I just bought 7
of your original works. I didn't buy the kids story and I actually
repurchased 4 of them that I already had because they were lost
when my hard drive died. Only problem is I haven't received the
stories yet. I bought them from your site suericfanfictions.com
please let me know if you received my order. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2017 01:11 PDT
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I loved this chapter. The teasing between Ben and Kyouhei, between
Ben, Steve and Kyouhei was great. I was laughing as I read. Aren't
the girls lucky, two pretty uncle's on both sides of the family.
And the end, oh the end, Ben has finally started to let his
intentions be known. He has something to protect. No more kissing
old girlfriends and perhaps we may get a mating. Great work Sue.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 15:18 PDT
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My, oh my, I do wonder what Zelig sensei said to Ben to get him all
wound up that he jumped Charity. Though she's his mate, I guess
he's always ready to jump her and definitely different from his
kiss with Manami. I am really loving the organic way that your
revealing the nature of Ben's relationship with his parents and the
fracture between him and Kyouhei. Using Charity as a way to explore
all of the questions gives each revelation space to be itself and
for us to see it. I'm dreading what will happen with this uprising.
Sesshoumaru is strong, undoubtedly, so is Inuyasha and this is why
they've made sure they've trained all of their children to protect
themselves and their loved ones but just as Sammie was overwhelmed.
I fear that an extended battle may overwhelm them. I guess only
time will tell eh? Two great chapters, awesome writing. Keep them
coming Sue.
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Title: Awesome, as always
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say thank you for sharing your beautiful gift of
writing and the world you created for us. I am so busy and only
have time to read a few things. I came across your original Purity
story a few weeks ago and then all of a sudden my "favorite" author
was doing another Story in the Purity universe. Thank you!! I've
just finished the last chapter of Redux Fruition and I love Ben and
Charity. (I'm also reading Toga's story again now, so I guess you
could say I've started rereading them all.). Again, thank you. I
look forward to more chapters. They make my day.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2017 11:15 PDT
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That intense kiss was unexpected but interesting. I was starting to
think Ben would never jump her. I also liked hearing more about
Ben's parents and get another view of their relationship. I feel
sorry for the brother though, he is going to be caught in the
middle. I hope he comes out ok.
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