| "Facing it Together" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Title: Again?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: ~MistressChaos~ On: December 11, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another cliffy?!?! Grr! I want to know what happens to Bulma and Chichi! I'm sorry you hand got cut off by the angry reader, but you must learn how to type with one hand and update quickly. Heehee. It's for the sake of all man-kind, and saiyan kind as well. Lmao. *Gives her some more chocolate* That's for doing such a great job, but that cliffy was kinda mean, so don't expect for me to lend you my flying monkey to be your slave for a week. Lmfao. Anyways, enough of this random stupidity. In all seriousness, please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh, that was kick ass, but the cliffy was so evil I think I might spontaneousely combust! Please hurry or I'll be ashes before you update again!!
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Title: EEPP >< WHY ISN'T IT FINISHED
Reviewed By: Lil o Me On: December 07, 2003 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>< pWease finish it sooooonnnnnn
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Title: Faceing it Together
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
this is an interesting little fic, despite the very short chapters. Keep up the good work, oh and could you please notify me when you post updates. Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Title: *Gasp*
Reviewed By: MistressChaos (not logged in) On: December 06, 2003 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you're leaving us hanging like that. That's sooo mean! I wan't to know what's gonna happen next...NOW. *Gives her chocolate* And there is plenty more where that came from. Lol. ^_~ PLEASE update soon. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before. You would have at least three review from me by now. I guess I must have forgotten. Sorry...heehee. Anyways, I promise I'll review from now on....as long you update of course. Oh, and if you dare put Geta in a pink tutu...be prepared to have no chocolate, reviews, or anything that's bring you pleasure! Muahahahahaha::cough::hahahaha. Sorry about that. J/K. Heehee. Well, ja ne! ~MistressChaos~
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Reviewed By: Jiggle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 08:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Good Chapter. I hope Turles gets what he deserves. Nice suspense, drama, and action. Keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: November 16, 2003 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I think Vegeta en Bulma are really in character, and the story is not _too_ dramatic, which is good. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: November 16, 2003 11:20 CST
Comment/Review:
HI Its NSBVEGETA MM IS BEIGN A BITCH! DAMN ITT!!!! HOW COULD UUUUU!!! GODDAMN IT ALL TO HELL!!!! I NEED MORE!!!! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!???? I Personify the ANGRY READER Character but not with a stapler with a SLEDHAMMER!!! HURRY ONNA SO HELP ME KAMI!!! LOL IM KIDDING UPPPPDAAAAAAAATE NE? LEMONNN TOO OK But not with Turles EW! LATER!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful chapter, if a short one. Please, update quickly...and with a longer chapter, if you wouldn't mind. I love your story!
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Reviewed By: Namekianballz On: November 07, 2003 04:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where this fic is going. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Smashing as always! Still lovin' it. Update soon!
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: runswithopenfists [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your disclaimer notes. There hilarious. Anyways great story. Update if and when you want to.
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Reviewed By: saiyajin_princess On: October 02, 2003 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon...i want to know what happens when vegeta wakes up
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Reviewed By: Bo On: August 21, 2003 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was quite good but it could have been more humorus it was for the most part too serious but the storyline was orginal so u get points for that update soon |
Reviewed By: Audra On: August 13, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Story is soooooooooo good please keep writing more. every time i started reading i couldnt stop its sooo good! Cant wait till more comes!
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