| "Facing it Together" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: Legana On: December 24, 2002 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoho, PLEASE UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTEEEEE
curious how it goes next!!!
update, update, update!!
great story =) |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 23, 2002 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaawwwwwww....sweeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!
though you can make the lemon a litle more longet next time...
great fic.!!!! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 23, 2002 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!! I'm curious how the rest goes... I will read on tomorrow, don;t have time to finish the story now.
KISS, great work! |
Reviewed By: Basilisk_Writer On: December 24, 2002 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy your fanfiction writing very much, I'm not but through the very first chapter, but to use a cliche, I can't put it down. I will most certainly pose more criticism when I finish what you've posted, but so far I can't find anything wrong or that I don't like!
~Em |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going ^_^ i can't wait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kakkarot's gonna feel like a dumas when he realizes that he missed his chances to wish ChiChi "Good Morning" as only a Saiyan male could. ^_~
Yes, those chapters were kind of short, but I'll live.
NOooooo!! You must've gotten ideas from one of my last reviews. I can't believe Turles wants to have Bulma as ... as ... errrg!! And to attempt to get on her GOOD side by giving her that sword, the nerve!! Although, he he, whenever a guy gives me a sword I'm happy too!! (I LOVE my sword collection!!) ^_~
*lol* When Vegeta just materialized in front of her and started speaking Japanese ... I was torn between having a heart attack and laughing my butt off. I'm SO glad he's getting more and more confused by the minute. You will SUFFER, Vegeta!! XD
I can't wait for the next installment!! In fact, if you could add duonotsuin@yahoo.com to your update list for this story that would be AWEsome!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Leah On: December 11, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC!! Man, all my fingernails are gone :). Please keep on weiting! It's great! |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 11, 2002 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey pretty darn good so far keep going i love the k/c scenes in it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Natsumi-Chan On: December 05, 2002 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoops didnt finish my review ^^" anyways as I was about to say I love the story so far keep it up!! And dont keep me hanging like this I NEED to know whats gonna happen next, can't wait! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Natsumi-Chan On: December 05, 2002 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack...no cliff hanger, ugh the torture > |
Reviewed By: L.O.S.S. On: December 02, 2002 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::screams in anguish:: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I want more..... this story is so amusing? Yes i do believe that is the word ::smiles:: I like this one and normally ones that are a little off story line annoy me.... but this one.... it's so great. i just love it ::smiles:: PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee ... I just DON'T know where to start this time ... I'll start with the end. *heh* I liked how there were uh *trying NOT to spoil it for the readers* "similarities" between reality and fantasy. *grins*
Bulma's a hottie, ne?? I mean ... even TURLES was looking!!! (uh oh!!) *heh heh heh* Me thinks the King's control is faltering. And Vegeta was waiting for her there ... *chuckles evilly* how DARE you leave it like that!!! Make him barge in/hit the master key-code or something ... 'cause I need my daily dose of close encounters of the V/B kind!!
*snickers* Speaking of "close" encounters ... I liked the Kakkarot/ChiChi action. *winks* You're the only writer (of the limited DBZ fanfiction that I HAVE read) that makes Kakkarot actually sexy!! (damn you to Hell, because I'm loyal to Vegeta!! ...and Trunks. ;) *melts into a little puddle onto the floor* It's SO wonderful that ChiChi's having some fun considering ... *gulp* her "limited time." *eyes tear*
Now if VEGETA would only be as sexy as Kakkarot (never thought those words would come from MY mouth because EVERYone knows who'd win the sexiest fullblooded Saiyan contest ... Bardok?? o.O *dodges sharp objects, exploding projectiles, and ki blasts* I'm kidding, I'm kidding!! *lol* of COURSE it's Vegeta!! ... or is it???) ... THEN my night would be complete! *smirks*
Well ... away I go to check my mail for another update!! *lol* Seriously ... we love it!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: November 01, 2002 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! Bulma did it again! ^.~
Wow, that's a tough decision she has there ... maybe she should come up with a plan, which involves her SEDUCING King Vegeta in order to get her way ... which would of course mean a B/V lemon ... which would be nice! ^.~
And a K/CC lemon would be nice, too ...
Heh, just as long as you update soon!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so great! Keep it comin' ^_~
So are you going to make this a V/B fic? Curiostiness...... |
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