| "Facing it Together" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Reviewed By: psycho On: August 08, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, please don't leave me hanging on this!!! Please write something soon!!!!!!
Thanks if you do and you suck if you don't!! :) |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: August 01, 2003 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I only have one question: why would Bulma run to the king with the knowledge of the planned insurrection considering that at the time she was just as pissed at him as were any of the conspiratros?
Personally, I think it would have been cool to have made this a Bulma/Turles fic, rather than the usual B/V. I do however think it was good for Turles to get his ass handed to him in the fight, it definitely adds to the insurrectionist part of the story. I guess my problem is that I don't quite see Turles as a villain but, then again I tend to like the "villains" more than the "heroes" in a lot of stories oh well, its your fic. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! This story kicks major ass! Don't just leave me hanging, though. Please add the next chapter soon!! Tankie |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: July 17, 2003 08:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally an update!!! I'm glad that Veggie beat Turles up. And how is Bulma going to get out of this mess? (hey, what's a girl to do when the prince of all saiyans is infatuated with you?) Looking forward to next update~ |
Reviewed By: L.O.S.S. On: April 09, 2003 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please have Veggie win win. It would seem wrong if Turles won. At least that's how i feel, but as the author it is your right to choose.
~LOSS |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I've never read anything like it. Hurry up and write the next chapter, I really want to know what happens, okay? |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta!!!!! That bitch turles cant win how dare u !
Turles is a Pussy .
p-u-s-s-y!
I hate him can Vegeta kill him now Pretty please!!
Ok dont hit me I know Turles is the villian and he cant die now Im sorry OW!!
Later Please continue! Update soon |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
VEGETA!!!!! can't have him lose to that ass turles. great story so far hope you post again soon |
Reviewed By: Bulma_chan On: February 25, 2003 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your stories. They r soo enjoyable and I think ur fic is the best one i've read so far ^.^ PLEEAASEE keep up the good work and update soon LOL |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: February 21, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! yer my hero! typing that fanfic for all us crazy lemon adicted readers even though yer hand was in much pain. thank you so much. and i hope yer hand is getting better. ^_^
There were a few spelling mistakes and what not, but not things that you couldn't figure out. It seems obvious that Chi Chi and Bulma prolly aren't gonna go home and stay there. which is really cool. ^_^
I feel sorry for Vegeta's past, it's rather sad. and you'd think with a sweet mother, she wouldn't have been so cruel with her last words to her son. *sigh* oh well, my mother appears to be nice but is actually a bitch so i can relate.
AHEM..anyways, nice job on the chapter. lemon..^_^ i'm satisfied now. lol and happy with your talented work. i can't wait til yer next update. good luck! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINNAAAAALYYYY A lemon YAY!!
Shot but good nonetheless UPDATE SOONN! PLEASE!!
And Yeah before I forget
When is the next lemon going to be?*Hentai grinn*
Later! |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh...Vegeta is such an ass in this fic. He also seems to be a bit dumb...lol, no offense, but if his underlings can get the best of him than he is missing some of his usual intelligence. Other than that, your writing continues to be good. *big dorky grin* |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey there. Well, It is very pleasant to find such a well written story. I usually review a lot so I will try and keep my first review short. Your style is refined and quick to the point, Im really enjoying this. You have a lot of original ideas, and I respect that a lot, especially the color association with rank and social status..cool! Well, now more reading (Heh, sorry I guess this isnt short like I promised) |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I started reading this somewhere else... at any rate, nice story! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Jam( to family) Dilan( to friends) On: February 15, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic was sooooooooooooooooo perfect why did you end it in Chapter 14? |
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