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| "Facing it Together" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] | Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 15:02 CDT
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Cliffhanger! No fair! :-( I'll just have to hope and pray that you update soon, and end my misery. ^_^ This is really good! Please continue! | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As for the apology ... *does a double-take* Heh, I didn't notice -_-, so ... apology accepted!!
*snickers* Kakkarot want's to play, eh? O.O Huh, I never thought of him as a sex symbol until now. ^_^
"...And time, as I said earlier, is something that I don't have."
"...Then, I guess we'll have to make the best of it..."
*melts*
*LMAO!!* The tail!!! Ohmygod, that was FUNny!! XD
Phew!! I'm glad that Chi Chi's going to "think about it." I mean, how do we know that he's not just, well ... ready for the Saiyan mating season to begin? *heh* I'm SO untrusting of romantic talking Saiyans. The one's who ... "act" (heh heh) I believe. ^_~
Uh, as for the rest... *clears troat and cracks knuckles*
Ooooh, Turles is even scaring me at this point. (and that's just from his aura) *gulp*
*chuckles at Vegeta's chuckling* Heh, he's SO friggin sexy (can tell what's on HER mind today), and he's thinking about her!! Whoo hoo, we're making progress!! (stresses the fact that it's GOOD that the V/B isn't being rushed because it's better that way) Heh heh, yes Veggie, Bulma likes to ... spar. ;)
O.O NOooooo!! Not "the dragonball inquiry" aGAIN!!! !! And Turles is in the room ... great, JUST great. "Corona Dragonballs?" As in the Namekian set?? *scratches head* And he wants her to make something to find the Earth Dragonballs?
`Already did that, you fool.' *snerks*
"I will hold the repairation of your ship until you do." *facevaults*
"I'm the king of all Saiyans, woman. I can do anything."
*jaw drops* O.O *drools at THAT tone*
Ohmygod,ohmygod, what's she gonna DO?!?! She CAN'T just GIVE him the radar because he'd know that she was holding out on him. And if she gives him a bogus radar that doesn't work, then he'll probably KILL her. And she can't refuse, because then he'd probably STILL kill her. *pouts* And we KNOW she doesn't want to stay with him forever and ever, so... *grrrrrr* My head hurts. :( (Write MORE, write MORE!!!;) | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! I KNEW that Bulma couldn't resist the urge to hurry up the process of fixing her ship! Hm, the head technician's checking her out--
Nooooooo!!! ANYone but Yamcha!!! *coils in fear*
What!?!? She's gonna HELP him build a gravity chamber!?!?! No, please Bulma, have some sense and let the imbecile get blasted to oblivion!!
Ha ha ha! In your face, Veggie-boy! You must NOW deal with Bulma THE Mechanical Genius!! XD
Uh ... oh. If he think BULMA's in charge than-- *gulp* I don't know if I want to know what he has to say to her. *cough* YES I DO *cough*
This story is REALLY great and getting better every chapter!! ^_^ | Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: October 13, 2002 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! | Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 12, 2002 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing I can't wait to see what happens. So far your originality has been outstanding concerning the colours and throwing poor Yumcha in the middle of it. Which I hope will deign some type of jelousy attack from Vegeta as I can already see the sparks flying between Yumcha and Bulma.
well I won't forget to review later.
Keep up the good work and God Bless!!! | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 16:11 CDT
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gah damn computer sorry about that ^ keep it coming!^_^ | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 16:10 CDT
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mer evil cliffhangers >_ | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 16:10 CDT
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mer evil cliffhangers >_ | Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 25, 2002 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chap! yay for updates! i love your story! | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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he he he ... ChiChi and Kakkarot are so cute. *sigh* So are Bulma and Vegeta, but ... not in THIS universe. -_-
Wait, what's that? She like's his flowers? And she's already attracted to him?? *eyes sparkle* Awwww there's hope for those two yet!! :D
oooooo, the revolution is building. Will Radditz kill his own brother, Kakkarot?? I'm sure he'll try. To be honest, I'm kind of surprised Radditz and Limato talked about the plot out in the open. It was pretty risky. I mean, someone could have HEARD. *hint hint*
Um, I don't remember if I've asked these questions before or they've been covered, but ... what happend to Bardock and Vegeta's father Vegeta?? *lol* And where's Brolli?? *lmao* I'm WAY too inquisitive for my own good. :p
Good job this time. The only thing it needed more of was ... Bulma/Vegeta!! :D Can you tell I'm obsessed with them? Only one typo, I think. *heh* I like where this story is going ... keep it going!! ^_^ (PS. I'm sorry my review posted twice last time. I must've accidentally double clicked instead of clicked -_-) | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*eyes glance to her beloved sword collection and sniffles* Vegeta's a monster-a MONSTER, I tell you!!
*chuckles* Well, at least Kakkarot and Chi Chi are hitting it off.
And at least HE was happy about Chi Chi's color selection.
Hm, I was thinking, I reread the description again and thought, "'she shows up, wearing Vegeta-sei's possesive colors?'" So ... shouldn't he be HAPPY the clothes possess something so exotic? *heh* As if.
I'm wondering, is Bulma a techno-genius in this AU? And if she is, why can't she fix her own ship? And if she'd profer it that way, then would Vegeta let her??
Btw, I like the chapter title. *he he he* It's just so EVilly fitting. ;)
Great start, keep 'em coming! ^_^
PS You know how DBZ fanfic writers write disclaimers saying that they don't own DBZ? (which SUCKS!!) I now CAN say that I own Planet Vegeta!! *lol* How?? Uh, well *scratches her head* I guess I meant the battleground promo-card from the DBZ CCG. *sigh* It sure felt good to say it, though. -_- | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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*eyes glance to her beloved sword collection and sniffles* Vegeta's a monster-a MONSTER, I tell you!!
*chuckles* Well, at least Kakkarot and Chi Chi are hitting it off.
And at least HE was happy about Chi Chi's color selection.
Hm, I was thinking, I reread the description again and thought, "'she shows up, wearing Vegeta-sei's possesive colors?'" So ... shouldn't he be HAPPY the clothes possess something so exotic? *heh* As if.
I'm wondering, is Bulma a techno-genius in this AU? And if she is, why can't she fix her own ship? And if she'd profer it that way, then would Vegeta let her??
Btw, I like the chapter title. *he he he* It's just so EVilly fitting. ;)
Great start, keep 'em coming! ^_^
PS You know how DBZ fanfic writers write disclaimers saying that they don't own DBZ? (which SUCKS!!) I now CAN say that I own Planet Vegeta!! *lol* How?? Uh, well *scratches her head* I guess I meant the battleground promo-card from the DBZ CCG. *sigh* It sure felt good to say it, though. -_- | Reviewed By: Lynn On: September 09, 2002 23:57 CDT
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Keep it coming. So far, so good. | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 00:44 CDT
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Just so you know, you seem to have posted TheRebels twice--once as a prologue and once as chapter one.
I never would've guessed that Vegeta would ever use weapons ... or be nice to some blue-haired alien wearing the royal colors. *shrugs* But that's just me.
And Nappa, Turles, and Radditz preparing a rebellion. Whoa, heavy.
So, what happened to Goku, did he succeed in taking over Earth?
And why does Bulma wear "the royal colors?"
Keep writing, it sounds good so far!! ^_^ | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries* That was so evil! Damn, that was just to evil! Anyway, Keep up the great work, and you better update soon! I know my threats mean nothing, but hey it's still fun!
Ja ne~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* | | Pages (6): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] |
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