| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2012 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haven't updated in two years. Your last few updates were random though so who knows, you may still surprise us. This fanfic is probably the best out there so I hope you get around to finishing sometime. =) |
Reviewed By: Lamica-Lee On: May 29, 2009 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear if I hadn't had so much spam and junk in my email, I would've read and reviewed this sooner. x3 I'm glad to have seen that you updated after like a year. xD lol Though I'm not one to talk. ^^;; I hope you do update again soon though, I love this story and I don't want to forget what's going on with it, even though I'd probably just go back and read a few chapters to refresh my memory.;D Hope to read more in the near future; Forever hooked -Lamica
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 19:50 EST
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It has certainly been a while! I'm glad you're still writing =) As always, great chapter - still as great as ever. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only recently gotten in VII. This isn't half bad a story. I found it interesting how you started with everyone in character and then sorta shifted them into the characters you have now while still following the events of the game more or less. I also love the mental banter between Jenova and Sephiroth. If I recall my game plot correctly, it's at this point they head to the Temple of the Ancients, which is when the whole Black/White Materia subplot really takes off and I'm wondering how you'll handle that. There were a few areas where it was glaringly OOC, but as a whole it's like that and while I found it acceptable for the most part, there were a couple lines where my eyebrow just shot up. Overall, a quite good story.
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Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:08 EST
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Another cute little addition where you've somehow kept Sephiroth in character ._. It wasn't much after such a long wait, but life gets in the way like that most of the time. I'll be waiting for the next update! Still reading ya ^^
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Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: July 13, 2007 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he loves her he loves her he really really loves her *does a dance*
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Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: July 11, 2007 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me go from a ten to a five wtf!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?fix it damn you!!!!
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Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: July 09, 2007 13:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was that the end!?! i really hope not, amazing story
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Title: ^^b
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 18:06 EDT
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Always happy when you update =) Sephiroth is funny when he's drunk XD And I really like this Ayame character. I'm really interested to see what happens with Seph and Aeris in the end. Anyways, update soon, I can't wait to read more ^^
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 09:10 EDT
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Heh, an update. I had to look twice when I saw it XD But man, you make it worth the wait y'know! I love your style, it's so fun and entertaining, but deep at the same time. Even if the story doesn't progress much in a chapter, i'm always left satisfied when i'm done reading it. =) I love the interactions with Seph and Aeris, so sweet and real, and I can just imagine Sephiroth's expressions XP ("How am I supposed to buckle my pants over this thing?!"). Loved the short scene with Cloud. Keep up the great work, and I hope you update sometime this year! XD
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Reviewed By: Masamune'sSong On: February 16, 2007 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. Upon re-reading, the part where he sends himself rolling down the mountain is still really funny. Plus: "Now that she was no longer `innocent', everything was a big, dirty joke" is an all-around great line. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Masamune's Song [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 03:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just checking in again to say I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Masamune's Song [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story so much! (I'm particularly fond of this chapter...) And a belated happy birthday! (I thought your story was a great gift!)
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Reviewed By: PrettySephy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Aeris & Sephiroth as a couple. And I'm also enjoying the storyline with Yuffie.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 (not signed in) On: December 23, 2006 14:35 EST
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Awww, this was so perfect! Buti'm sensing a twist. You won't make anything bad happen, will you? *Puppy eyes* Please don't. Sephy's finally all sensitive and mushy! Don't ruin it!
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