| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Masamune'sSong On: February 16, 2007 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. Upon re-reading, the part where he sends himself rolling down the mountain is still really funny. Plus: "Now that she was no longer `innocent', everything was a big, dirty joke" is an all-around great line. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Masamune's Song [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 03:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just checking in again to say I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Masamune's Song [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this story so much! (I'm particularly fond of this chapter...) And a belated happy birthday! (I thought your story was a great gift!)
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Reviewed By: PrettySephy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Aeris & Sephiroth as a couple. And I'm also enjoying the storyline with Yuffie.
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 (not signed in) On: December 23, 2006 14:35 EST
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Awww, this was so perfect! Buti'm sensing a twist. You won't make anything bad happen, will you? *Puppy eyes* Please don't. Sephy's finally all sensitive and mushy! Don't ruin it!
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Title: Yay! update =D
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, this is the first FF7 fic i've read, mainly because i was a bit baffled by the pairing *i mean c'mon,he kills her in the game,so i was wondering how a paring like this would work out =P*.but i have to say i'm glad i took he time to read it,i was hooked on the storyline almost instantly, and its interesting to see how the SxA relationship develops *especially Sephi rolling down the hill (>_
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Title: Kepp on Burnin'!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 00:12 EST
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Well now...this was quite a wonderful surprise. I was browsing mm.org before I got to my e-mail, and oh my! An Update? Oh my! And now that I have read this new chapter...I can definitely say that you still "got it". Despite the space of time between this chapter and the last, eveything rolls over smoothly, you don't skip a beat! I found this chapter to be an interesting development for the growing romance between everyone's favorite least-expected-couple. Besides showing how things are progressing as far as lovers go, did I sense the groundwork for some serious conversations between Sephy and Aeris in the near future? Anyways, this chapter has been nothing short of amazing, keep it up! I said I'd see it through, and I intend to keep that promise. Cheers and God bless! ~ forechunkukee
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Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 00:50 EST
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im sooo glad youre back!! i love the way this story isgoing althoughi do have one question... will this be entirely canon? the rolling down a mountain when he figusres out hes in love priceless. i laughed so hard i was crying. please dont leave us hanging agian!! love your work hope to see much more. thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: October 07, 2006 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!!! An update!! I knew you would do it eventually XD I LOVED the chapter by the way! Nice and interesting with not too much lovey dovey ^.~ Good luck with the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally finished reading what you have up! It has me burning for more. I hope you have time to update again fairly soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 13:43 EDT
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I just made it to chapter twenty-one! I should of left a reveiw for every chapter read but I'm grounded and sneaking on at the moment>.< This story is so awsome it's fun to think of Aeris doing all this during the game. Which I've started to replay. I'm almost at the part where Aeris dies...I always cry. She's my favorite character. I can't wait to read about that though. Will he acually kill her? I love this story it is so interesting and you've captured the characters greatly. Well I'm done You'll get another reveiw when I finish reading^_^
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Reviewed By: l2achel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed it...Waiting for the next part. I think the best parts is were Aeris is like a deer trapped in head lights stage with Sephiroth.
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Title: Insanity
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 01:54 EST
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My initial thoughts upon reading this story: This guy must be insane! Sephiroth and Aeris?!? Well, my tune's changed quite a bit since then. Upon completing the 25th chapter, something struck me. This is one hell of a good write. In all honesty, this is one of those pieces out there that makes mm.org look good. Your stlye is awesome, conveying everything that needs to be said in a simple manner. Your spelling/grammar is tight, and the few mistakes that occur here and there aren't much of a big deal. It took some time getting used to the whole Sephiroth/Aeris idea, but once that passed, I realized that you made this story something that most authors can only hope their work becomes: believeable. Staying completely within the bounds of the FFVII universe, you've created something that in my opinion can totally happen. This is superb work work, keep it up. The only real complaint I have are the infrequent grammar/spelling mistakes that pop up here and there. Seriously, that's it. Update soon! I know life happens and delays come up, but seeing another update soon would be sweet. I'll be following this until you finish it. Peace , and keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Vega Lyrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... SO... FRIGGIN'... CUTE! I'm so glad you've updated, sweetie!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 12, 2006 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD that was funny/wierd and awkward o_O he's such a pansy, can't just spit it out can he
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