| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 18:37 PST
Comment/Review:
No offense gokusgirl, but I waited two months for that? There was almost no plot in this particular chapter; it was more like filler. However, as a whole I love the story and I can't wait to see how it develops. I'm just dissapointed with this particular chapter. |
Reviewed By: silverdragon_eye On: December 17, 2002 18:15 PST
Comment/Review:
@_o...
No fair...*pouts* Don't you think that was just a little too short? |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 18:09 PST
Comment/Review:
WEE!!!
Yay!!! Another chappy, and beautifully written, I might add!!
Though I was a bit disappointed, you only wrote the whole chapter on just Bra and Pan in that shoe store, then they chatted for a moment or so, and then that was it.
I understand how hard it is to always keep your readers pleased and keep cranking out chapters, so I'm not critisizing you or anything (did I spell critisizing right? ...Oh well!), but it's just a way of letting you know that I LOVE your story and I can't WAIT for more!!! ^_^
Please crank out the next chapter (hopefully longer this time) As Soon As Possible!!!!
Ja 4 Now!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I know the next chapter is gonna be Bra/Goten, but sneak in some hints with Trunks and Pan!!! =D I'm so excited, I can't wait!!! You're the best!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: December 16, 2002 20:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I've never read this before!!!
Oh...it is so WONDERFUL! Another AWESOME fic....I am eagerly awaiting the next update. |
Reviewed By: xocherryxo On: December 16, 2002 18:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD JOB!! ur story is awesome, write more soon !!! me in suspense ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Xanthe On: December 15, 2002 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great potential in the story. Please post the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Death Flower [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The enjoyment factor was nine because it was so short!!! C'Mon! Next time, make the chapter shorter. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin on Hime On: December 13, 2002 14:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friends are pissed at me because I recommended this fic and it isn't finished. I have one word for you... UPDATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: March 16, 2003 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The bathroom scene was so funny, LOL. Trunks is sure having trouble resisting Marron. You can tell what he's thinking with. I can't wait to see how you change this to T/P, since yes, I'm a T/P fan. If Goten thinks his dad is going to be able to explain what's happning to him, I'll be surprised if he'll know. Maybe Trunks will...and Chichi, who knows *besides you* what she'll do next. Doesn't she realize there are 2 B. Briefs? Can't wait for the update. |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 07:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon, *falls on her knees* PLEASE!!!
I need more to read!!! |
Reviewed By: someone who red ur story On: December 01, 2002 16:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! come on ur killin me! Ill die befor u finish this story. PLEASE HURRY! |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 07:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES!!!
*runs around while she's throwing candy into the air* |
Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 22:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE to know what Bra's planning for Goten! Oh lord! And that Marron! What a little tramp!
I'm loving this honey! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 13:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...LOVED IT!!! Hurry up! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 13:31 PST
Comment/Review:
WAHHH!!! *sniffles and sobs* It's too short!!! ;_;
But it's better than nothing!!! ^_^ That was a really good chappy, but I just wish there was more!!!
Please, please, PLEASE update ASAP!!!! =D Tankies!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: I'm still working on your piccie for this story... o_o;; Sorry it's taking a while, but I've been really busy. You'll get it soon though!!! I promise!!! Thanks for waiting! ^_^ |
| Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] |
