| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: >:/
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 13:10 PDT
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You just love to torture pathetic people like me? I Think You Should Hurry, And Get On With The Story. But besides that; the story is very good and very nice written ^_^
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Reviewed By: swtcandiee On: March 31, 2004 20:48 PST
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update now!! please?
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 22:07 PST
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Please, please, please continue this fic. I know you are writing on another series, but please finish this one. It's one of my favorites!!! I pleaded with Melizmac to put in a good word to you. Please, I begging here....
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Title: more..?
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 10:44 PST
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Um.. I need my fix..!! :'(
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Reviewed By: ladybugg1234_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on. I've been waiting since forever for you to update. I want an update now!! Great story. just needs....hmmm.....I don't know....um....maybe....an..update?
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Reviewed By: LeeLuoChan1 On: January 26, 2004 15:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV IT! I can't wait for the next chappie! Keep up the GREAT work! ~Melis
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 01:44 PST
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hey!! i love you story i hope you contineu soooon
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you very busy, but I just wanted to let you I am patiently waiting for a update and still very interested in seeing it continue.
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Reviewed By: jenna On: November 16, 2003 10:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, keep up the good work.
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Title: chapter 12
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 06:56 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't review sooner, actually I thought I had but I don't see it. I'm so glad you updated!!! And that this fic is going to continue. I'm surprised Chichi disregarded the fact that it could have been Bra rather than Bulma, but if Chichi gets her mind set, it is hard to change. I see Pan is fairing a little better with Trunks, but Marron had to show up. Looks like Pan is going to have to either deal with Marron or prove to Trunks she's the better woman or both. Things should get interesting.
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Reviewed By: LiL PriNCeSs Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 18:24 PDT
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hey that was good.. sorry it always tkaes me a long time to read these... u gotta get the next chapter out soon ok.. i really really wanna ko what happens.. lol that convo between goku n goten was funny.. lol...
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Reviewed By: Nana Babee On: October 19, 2003 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is my new favorite story *smile* all day long I've been searching for a good story and here I found one. I think you have a great potential. Hehe I hope you continue writing and update very soon! I really enjoyed this story, please continue. ~Nana~
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Title: Ur Awsome.
Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is might be the best T/P, Gtn/Bra fic that I've ever read. I really like your characterization, although I think that Goten is kind of OOC, but I love him ^_^ So the awaited encounter between Chichi and Bulma may be in the next chapter (I'm on the edge of my seat), hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 16:35 PDT
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Damn, Marron is really such a bitch! Update soon!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: phillip On: October 10, 2003 16:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a cool story... keep it up now... dont waste my time waiting for you to be done with this fanfic... =)... hope you finish it... and fast too!!!
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