| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: YoungS On: December 28, 2007 12:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this ^_^ I've been reaing it since summer and was seriously happy when I finally seen you had updated it I cant wait to see the rest !
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Reviewed By: goodknight On: October 20, 2007 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god i love this story i read it all in like one day it just caught my interest through out the whole story. i really hope you update soon PLEASE =)
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Reviewed By: Izebird On: September 27, 2007 00:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
omg. YOU FREAKIN ROCK. :D PLEASE CONTINUEEE!! I've been reading this forever. IM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED.
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Armstrong On: September 26, 2007 10:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Trunks did clean up his act. I'm impressed. And he's finally taken an intrest in Pan-chan!!!!! Yay Pan-chan!!!! (claps histerically) and Andrea is finally getting off her french ass and being put to work...haha... Enjoyed this chapter!!!!!! Kudoes!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I SWEAR something's wrong with mm.org's system! You're on my Author Alert list and I'm supposed to receive an e-mail every time you update, but it never came! I might have to report this to mm.org's staff. But anyway, I'm glad that Trunks turned over a new leaf. It makes me wonder how far the date will go with Pan...and it makes me wonder when everyone else is going to find out about them. I was saddend that Veggie-chan (LoL!) was angry about what he done, but it's understandable. Either way, whenever you decide to update, just know what I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: ElctricButrfli [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 01:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Another chappie! And he's finally making a move! I'm as happy as a kitten with tuna! lol. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: forgot sign in name On: September 13, 2007 07:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loving it. Good pan/trunks scene! Hopefully more to come. Update!^-^
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Armstrong On: September 09, 2007 11:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks like Trunks has finally saw the light!!!!! Thank goodness!!!!! I wonder what's going to happen to Marron now that Trunks doesn't want her around...and what about our sweet little Pan?!? Will she get what she wants? Or will she be bitting off more than she can chew? But all things aside; what's going to happen between Bra and Goten? They seem to be getting along...for now anyway... But let's all hope and pray that Trunks keeps his you-know-what in his pants this time!!!!!!! I enjoyed this chapter and the spelling and grammar...as you said, were
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Reviewed By: ForBloodIsLife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so so so sooooooo freaking happy that you've posted again! I have been waiting, along with many of your other fans, and now I can breath again! Well, I'm sure it will turn into little pants until the next chapter comes out. :) You have a great writing style and this story and kept me enthralled since I first read it. Keep up the awesome work! (and congrats!)
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Reviewed By: ElctricButrfli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I have never..or have I...lol written a review. My computer is always acting up so it rarely lets me write one. Thankfully though I just recently got some things fix on it so I'll be able to review more often. I really REALLY enjoy reading your fic! For a minute there I was beginning to wonder if it was gonna be finished. I look forward to the updates. There isn't many good fics out there that catch my interest but this one has. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chappie! Oh! And congrates on having a baby!
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Reviewed By: forgot sign in name On: August 27, 2007 10:48 PDT
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I think its getting good, but I do wish there are more Trunks and Pan scenes, I hope we're getting there soon! Update^-^
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Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter filled with several turning points. I'm happy that Trunks ditched Marron (finally) so he and Pan can be together. Their relationship was so weird and unnatural. It's a good thing Bra showed up, too. Otherwise Goten would be no more. Yea for his survival! Anyways, great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 06:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's interesting. Usually I'll get a e-mail notification saying that you updated one of your stories. But either way I still liked the chapter. Whether you decide to finish this story or not just know that I did enjoy reading it over the years.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know GG, you are really missed. I've been to this site everyday since January (since you last updated) just to see if you're going to continue with this story. But from the looks of it, you're probably not. I just wanted to tell you (from one of your biggest fans) that I really enjoyed this story (so far) and I'm saddened because it doesn't look like it'll ever be complete.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up with the updates, come on you cant just leave us hanging on like this...pleaseeee...this story is really getting interesting.
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