| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: June 05, 2003 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated!!! Loved the conversations in this chapter. Looking foward to Goku's talk to Goten. I think Pan should get to kick Trunks' ass for that comment. Hope you can update the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!!!! I must say...YOU ROCK!!!!!! I MEAN IT TOO!! Wow!!
Anyways: I read "Fate's Hand" a few days ago, and I was really intrigued to find out that YOU had helped out the author! That was SUCH a MASTERPIECE!!! I'm a fairly new member here (2 months) I got a series of my own that is doing REALLY ! Its called "Hilarious Outakes!" and I JUST finished it, too!
Although I'm done with it, I was wondering if you'd leave me a review telling me wheter or not I should continue with 30 more chapters for it!!
The Title is called "Hilarious Outakes!"
The Author is Mikey B23
The Genre is Hentai/Comedy
The Animes included are:
-DBZ
-Card Captor Sakura
-Pokemon
-Digimon
-Inu Yasha
-SailorMoon
-Sonic the Hedgehog (my PERSONAL FAV. ANIME!)
-Gundam Wing
-Metroid
-Yugioh!
Sory for the LONG review, but Mikey B23 needs to know!! I'd really appreciate your response!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!........................... |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it hasbeen a while since I have read this and guess what it was worth it oo. I love this story and please up date soon. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Reji On: June 03, 2003 07:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHhhh, you are so mean....this was not what I expected at all.
I think Trunks should get a real spanking for being suchs a jakass and so does Chi Chi for being so nosy.
Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: gjhggk On: June 03, 2003 03:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like the story but this t/p g/b fanfic is lacking one element. T/P!!! I'm beggining to think this is going to turn out a t/m! Another thing I just have to tell you cause I'm annoying and like to have the facts right, Bra and Pan are about the same age (give or take a year) so bra is just as much a child to goten as pan is to trunks. And another thing pans a fighter, and chichi's grandaughter at that, if trunks were to call her a baby she would have socked him (and it would hurt to cause she could beat up goten at five) despite the fact that she likes him. Thats just how pan is. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 02:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I ever told you how much I HATE Chi Chi??? I hope Bulma smacks her in the mouth! Another great chap! |
Reviewed By: _____ On: April 13, 2003 20:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Update when you're free please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
BULMA BRIEFS??? Whoa... wasn't expecting that!!! And Trunks has feelings for MARRON??? Darn... how is this gonna be a B/G T/P lemon??? Can't wait until the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know I love this story!!!
Chichi is so stupid it ought to be illegal!!! LOL she sees panties in Goten's pocket and the first person she thinks of is Bulma??????????????????????? OMG that was the funniest thing I've ever heard!!!!!!!!!!! If it was Goku's pockets yeah sure I could see that... but GOTEN???
The lemon was wonderful honey, well worth waiting for!!! And I know when you finally get to it, the T/P lemon will be awsome too!!
I hate Trunks with Marron... oh wait a sec... I just don't like Trunks in general right now, that man is such a jerk! Poor Pan getting stuck with him!! LOL I want to know what Vegeta will say about his little princess with Goten when Bulma gets yelled at by CC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing honey!! Love ya!! |
Reviewed By: DiamondHalo On: March 22, 2003 10:39 PST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!! It's great!!! One request though, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get to the T/P parts! Trunks and Pan are my fave couple! Update very soon please! I need to read more of this story! I'm addicted to it! |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 16:14 PST
Comment/Review:
Err, how do you get Bulma from Briefs? I mean, it could be anyone's; Bulma's mother, Bra, Bulma...some random clone out to take over the world. Anybody. However, this should prove to be a very interesting plot twist. Poor Goten though...I actually feel sorry for him. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:47 PST
Comment/Review:
XD I'm sorry, but ChiChi is stupid...
This is getting good!!! ^_^ I'm so glad you've updated!! It's been WAY too long!!!
Please update A.S.A.P. 'cause I can't wait!!! =D I wanna see some T/P going on!! ^_^ But, maybe that's just me...*growls and hisses at Marron* ^^;;
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: It's a Mack truck, with a "k" at the end. Not that it matters...just though you'd like to know, though! ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 17:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The bathroom scene cracked me up!!!!
I've been married to the same man for 9 yrs and he still won't let me near the bathroom when he's in there!
Great chapter...as always! |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 07:08 PST
Comment/Review:
hey what with all the wait is something wrong it' almost been two months since u last added a chapter. there is many people scorching to read the next chapter. it seems I can't sleep at night just thinking of this story(j/k) but i'm close though. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! I came by hoping to see an update. I miss the perks of being the beta-onna and getting to read it 1st. **sniff, sniff** Oh well, I hope you'll have me back when the 'puter finally makes it over the big blue, this whole trekking to the library thing to get my ff fix is getting old. ~TTYL
May the muses keep you inspired ^_^
~EM |
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