| "Never Meant to Love Him" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: November 13, 2002 09:15 CST
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Awwww...that's a great ending...better than mine! Lol! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet and so beautiful! I really loved the ending ... even without a lemon, it was perfect! |
Reviewed By: valeyard On: November 01, 2002 07:51 CST
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Wha? We are supposed to know what happens by now!
You've definitely got me interested. So what is the big secret of Somoria? I gots to know! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 31, 2002 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm stunned. What a chapter. You're writing is damn beautiful and poetic. You could've given Keats a run for his money ^_^. Well, it'll be interesting to hear what Vegeta has to say to Bulma, and even more interesting, how will she feel about Vegeta after he spills his guts out. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next and last. Great job Ember!!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: October 31, 2002 17:25 CST
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GAH! Evil evil evil! What a mean cliffy!!! *sniffle* I don't wanna wait two weeks!!! *pout* Heh heh, great chapter though! Absolutely fantasmal! I wanna see what happened! Good thing Vegeta's showing her! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 06:45 CST
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Great... Bit darker then I normally like, but nicely written. I can't wait to discover Vegeta's motives! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:30 CDT
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Wow...gotta love it! I wish I could give you a better review, but I'm all out of compliments! Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 01:13 CDT
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Neato! What do you mean, I have to wait 'till Halloween to read the rest? Gah! Well, writing of this calibre is worth waiting for.
Like: Bulma's characterization, perky and self-assured without being overly annoying, to me anyway. Vegeta's characterization in refusing to be waylaid by anything he considers trivial - not like some other fics in which he's a total pushover for anything Bulma does. Huzzah!
Bothered by: in the video camera footage, the camera was strapped to his belt, right? I was having trouble telling what exactly was in the footage - after all, you really shouldn't have been able to see what he was doing from that angle. Bulma would have to deduce what was happening in some places because bits and pieces of the action would be all that was visible. IMHO.
Waiting for more! |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: October 11, 2002 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving it! I can't wait to for the next chapter! Halloween will be a long what but I'm sure it will be so wroth it! |
Reviewed By: valeayrd On: October 10, 2002 16:32 CDT
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You have me intrigued!
Vegeta becomes a member of Reality TV:-)
Me want more! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 13:42 CDT
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I like it! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 13:16 CDT
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Wonderfull, as always. Once Vegeta discovered the camera he knew who put it there and why. I believe with your writing skills Bulma will see there's much more to the Prince than just destroying planets and murdering innocents.
Anxiously awaiting update.
Waiting..................... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a great idea for a Holloween fic! Wow, that was intense and gruesome in chapter two...can't wait to read the rest on Bulma's overall reaction on what she saw! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT? WHAT DID BULMA SEE?????????? 0_0 EXCELLENT! Meh ish luvin' it! KEEP WRITING, OH GODDESS OF THE BULMA AND VEGETA FAN WORLD! *bows down* |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: October 01, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
original and in character. i like it |
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