| "Absence" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: okoyr On: March 31, 2004 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say "absence" is the best fanfiction of rei and usagi that i have ever read! very good and descriptive!! The part where rei was dying was very dramatic!! *sniffs*! i was close to the verge of crying! great job! i do hope that you will write a sequel to it!! please continue with the awesome work!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: cratbro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very well done and I hope the author will write a sequel that is equally good. You used suspense very well and the fact that the "moment" actually meant Rei would be hurt instead of Usagi was a clever surprise. While for an online story these chapters are very long, they would be suited perfectly to a physical book. Congratulations once again and good luck! P.S. My web clan has decided to designate this piece as one of the top ten out of five hundred online stories we have reviewed.
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Reviewed By: Carl Thrilwell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic. One of the best I've read since gawd knows when. I especially liked the way Haruka and Michiru were coupled. Reading this story kinds of gives you a different view of this anime itself. Took me six hours throughout the night to finish this. This is good, cause I never liked Mamoru. DIE Mamoru!! Muahahahaha!!!
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Reviewed By: theresa On: October 25, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i unsually do not like these kind of stories. because i liked usagi and mamour together, their are may favortie couple. but you have wrttien much better type of story then most have.and heaven be praise ,you did not follow the overused and overabuse plot by turned mamour into a wife beater and rapist,as so many wrtiers have done with these types of stories. it is okay to read thank you for bashing mamour in this story sandra
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Reviewed By: Tassy On: October 03, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fanfic basically after it was already fully posted here on mediaminer and I have to say it has still taken me almost a full year to read it. :P My best friend read this fic, and told me I had to read it too, and I'll admit I do not usually read Sailor Moon, or even shoujo ai fanfics, but this one was extremely well written. You did a great job and the story was amazing. I loved the action, the angst, and all the other good stuff. I hope to read more of your works so keep writing, you are awesome!
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Reviewed By: K.o.R On: October 01, 2003 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wow. I really thought I'd never get to finish reading this after FF.net removed it and I couldn't access MM.org. But, as you can see I finally got through it all. R/U is my fave pairing, although any shoujo-ai pair is fine :P "OMG! You killed Rei - no, the blade was broken" Great Noir reference :D "OMG! You killed Rei - for real this time" Such a great alternation between happy and sad bits made for a great ending. I can't wait for the sequel. K.o.R PS. Took me a week to read this. Not a second was wasted :D
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Reviewed By: sailor sol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. This...story...ummm...wow. Impressive and highly detailed from beginning to end. Great fights, very easy to envision, heart-tugging romance, and fabulous characterization(esp. mamoru, whom i don't hate i just think he's not right for usa). And, dare i say it, but i LOVED this fic to death, possibly even more than the original material. Yes...the cult of Kirika will soon arrive.......as soon as the sequel hits >:D |
Reviewed By: Lesiaf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 07:56 CDT
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3words FAN-TAS-TIC! |
Reviewed By: Lesiaf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 07:56 CDT
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3words FAN-TAS-TIC! |
Reviewed By: Moon Reaper On: August 02, 2003 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You *sniff* should have told me I'd need tisues. |
Reviewed By: Moon Reaper On: August 01, 2003 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so *wipes away tears* sad. Beautiful writing, I love it. |
Reviewed By: Moon Reaper On: August 01, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I linked here from reiandusagi.com site. The webmaster tells me that this story features all of my favorite couples. I can't wait to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: biki On: June 16, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirika just wanted to say i love your story too much. Thats bad..o.O Anyway how about a online comic of it? That would be awesome! A good artist with your story would make it look real like a real manga. heh anyway good writing |
Reviewed By: Kenny On: June 05, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, man! That was one of THE best story I have ever read! I have read many Rei/Usagi stories before, but yours completely rule over them!
I admit, I'm normally an angsty guy, and I actually hoped for the #3 alternate ending, but this was good enough.
Anyway, amazing story! Thank you for writing it! |
Reviewed By: Hubbe On: May 26, 2003 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply put: absolutely wonderful! Loved it lots! |
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