| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Title: starearle
Reviewed By: starearle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 14:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this story before. I don't remeber the site it was on but I know that I've read this before. I really enjoyed it the first time. Finding it again is a real joy. I didn't get to finish it before, but I hope to finish it this time. Keep on writing I highly enjoy your story lines and character development technic. I wish i could write like you or even spell as good as you. loving it
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 01, 2007 19:47 EDT
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I think what could be one of the reasons is that since people read this on FF.NET before it got pulled down, they're just waiting for you to get up to where FF.NET left off, like waiting for the new episodes of an anime to hit the television. Also, the option of turning on the switch to block anonymus reviewers doesn't help either, because as an anonymus reviewer, I come to both sites regularly as I'm sure many others would too, and if the visitors can't give a review, then the writers are denying the fans a chance to review their imaginations on paper.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 18, 2007 04:40 EDT
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It's good to see you do some work on this, but when d you plan to fully upload all the chapters on your homepage?
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story, please update soooooonnnnn...
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to make Yamcha a Saiyan? I thought that maybe you might be making Yamcha gay because he was never interested in Bulma, but now I think that you might be planning on making him a Saiyan…But wouldn't he know if he was some how a Saiyan? Not having a tail and all… I'm confused. Just update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! Bulma is pregnant, Vegeta is depressed, and I think Yamcha might be gay! I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 23:34 EDT
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please update soon ! im dieing to find out what's goin happan next.
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Title: A Light in the Darkness
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 14, 2006 14:07 EDT
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Isn't that how it always is, when you both jump to conclusions and then later find out that you both were wrong. great chapter can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 15:37 EST
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((I posted the last two ones, only under the wrong username.))
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Reviewed By: Gardian14 On: March 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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(To I'm your father)You're the one who sucks. I agree with maccam. You ARE a wuss. If you don't like it, go **** yourself. Its a great story line, so screw you, you ****er.
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Reviewed By: Gardian14 On: March 22, 2006 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Its always nice to have a change of couples and I'm glad you're making it where Goku and Chi-chi are getting along and not fighting. I also like the way you've made it to where Goku's not so much of a wimp when it comes to standing up to Chi-chi, but still have him in character. You seem to be a tad off on Vegeta's character, but I still like the way he's turning out. Good work on Bulma...I never thought of her as insecure, but what you're saying does make sense about her.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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This is one of the first DBZ stories I read. It's a must read classic and don't mind what other people say.
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Title: PISSED OFF.(maccam)
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 08:02 EST
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To (I'm your father)it's people like you who make me sick. who do you think you are. have you written anything in your pathic life. you have some nerve. I'm for one am glad that she's putting this great story back up, if you don't like it DON'T READ IT. I think your just jealous cause she is a great writer and you can't touch her work. if anything Your the one who makes us all sick with your crap!!!. Pity your not even man enough to post who you are, so craw back under the rock you can out of >.< Mia again THANK YOU for updating, and please don;t pay no mind to the little child that has nothing else better to do then say nasty things!
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Reviewed By: I'm your father On: March 22, 2006 07:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is way too overrated. An excessively use of lemons a very unbelievable and badly written plot. I was glad when this shit was taken down from fanfiction.net but it seems you could not survive without people brownnosing your ass. You should form a club with SUERIC
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Title: italiana
Reviewed By: eb On: March 19, 2006 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read dis story last year..but, I was pretty shy 2 write a review..so, I decided 2 du da unthinkable thing dis year! writin a review!! I luv dis story...it is among my top 10 favorite v/b fanfix, I was quite surprised with vegeta's emotion reavealed and all, he doesnt seem 2 b, mean and selfish and just arrogant in dis story, he seems more, nicer...hmmm, I still luv him anyways..good job!!!
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