| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mary On: October 10, 2002 11:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
I heard about this story at another site and read 1-60 at your site then found 61-72 at FF. Please post quickly!!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you moved! I loved it at FFN but i didn't get that far in it. |
Reviewed By: Niebezpiczny Ksiezyc On: October 06, 2002 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first started reading your fic at fanfiction.net, but you know how that story goes. The site is rather irritating and I myself often have problems with the site. I am sorry that you had to remove your story, but thank you for posting it elsewhere! Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 06:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!
Good to see you at MMO, I would guess that alot of writers of NC17 material will be moving their stories to MMO from FFN before the 12th of October. In any case, hope to read more of your wonderful story...keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: November 07, 2002 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this chapter...it's a really good one...i like how you have the whole thing even later on in the far reaches of your story, how bulma still feels insecure about herself. i think that that's a great little way to move the plot a bit...i can't wait till you get the rest of your story posted to your site... i think that you did a great job with putting the little blirp with mrs. briefs is just great! i remember the first time that i ever read it, i cracked up laughing...two of my friends read it too, and they both of them loved it and thought that it was great! |
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