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| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: DigitalAvatar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 08:45 EST
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Still keeping my eye on this fic...
And this will be my third time reading through chapters 1-75 (Or was it 76...?)
Anxiously waiting to read beyond, but this fic is so great I don't mind reading through it again. :D
--SPOLIER ALERT-- (For those that haven't read more than what's posted here at MediaMiner)
I still can't wait to find out whether Yamcha makes it to Super Saiya-jin ;) | Reviewed By: Jade Kitten On: March 02, 2003 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb!! Once again, I'm re-reading this on another site besides fanfiction.net. ^^ I just registered with this site a few minutes ago so I don't know if my name is signed in yet. Anyhoo, this story is wonderful as ever! Ja ne!
~Jade Kitten ~_^ | Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: January 15, 2003 08:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh...another great chapter...i thought that this chapter showed a bit of humour, which i greatly enjoyed...and it also showed that vegeta wasn't always mean...almost showed a tidbit of the softer side of him...i might say that he got in touch with his feminine side...but...i'm not. i also thought that it showed how a lot of people stereotypically think of vegeta, e.g. bulma, and how she wasn't really able to think of vegeta being able to say something simple like thank-you or something polite. i mean...he has to have manners...and he has better manners than(i believe) goku. for some reason, goku has grown up and matured...he's probably twenty-something years old by now, and he still acts quite a bit as a child. i will admit, that now that he has undergone the super-saiyan transformation, he has matured somewhat. any-who...back to reviewing your chapter...i like the chapter and it's a great job well done! sarah | Reviewed By: Heerosgurl On: January 02, 2003 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for getting this chapter out. I have been waitiing soo long for this. I've had to read it off of ur website at my dad's, which has been a drag. Not reading your fanfic, because I love it, but because my dad's modem is sooo slow, each chapter took almost 10 minutes to load.
When I first started reading fanfictions about DBZ, Goku/Chichi was my favorite, but then I saw this one. I was like "What the hey, I'll try it." And i LOVED it. You got me hooked on Vegeta/Bulma! It's all I read now!
Keep posting!
~Heerosgurl | Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I'd lke to say something about this chapter. What Bulma did WAS wrong, because she wasn't married to Vegeta when she let him take it away. So, actually they were both wrong from what they did. I skipped the lemon. I'm a christian, and I intend on keeping it that way. Not a flame, story's actually quite good, just pointing out the facts. | Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 01, 2003 05:55 EST
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great so far i liked that you added in a part with goku and chichi ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter | Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmm,lemon...next chapter soon? please? with hot fudge and a cherry? | Reviewed By: Cooey On: December 27, 2002 08:50 EST
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I've just found out about your new posting home. What's happening with ffn is a drag, hey. Re-reading your fic is as enjoyable as ever. Thanks. | Reviewed By: Just Another Saiyan Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 20:14 EST
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This is quite good. I am adding it to my favorite stories list. What is a beta-reader anyhow? Is it like a proofreader? | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While at home and sick, I thought I'd review again! OK, well it's great there is probably nothing you could do to make it any better than it already is.
You should have more reviews, *Curses those who don't reveiw* Muwahahaha!
Alrighty, well hope ya update soon!
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* | Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 19, 2002 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon! | Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: November 08, 2002 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you decided to give up on the PG-13 version!?!?!!?! i'm glad...i thought that it would be just too horrible...i mean, i know that you have the talent to do something when laking out the lemon, but i think that if they had a problem with your style of writing and all of the other authours, then i think that they should have dealt with it in a different way. i think that, in my personal opinion, that it's better as a total nc-17, than as a sorry excue for a pg-13. i'm glad that you've made this decision! bye! | Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: November 08, 2002 13:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liket his chapter. now, to answer your questions. i think that:
one is fanfic-orientated
two is right, maybe not a LOT, but every so often
three is not right...there is no evidence anywhere that he actually cheated on her, just small hints, like what bulma said in the trunks special, that is what she thought was going on
four is, i don't think, true...it never really is said that she's a bad cook, and durring dragonball, she cooks...so it can't be all that bad...but then again. for a long time, goku was the only one eating her food, so...you never know...
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five is...well, i think that that is made up by fanfiction...i'm not sure if they LIKE to fight eachother, i think that it just kinda...happens...given their background differences...
i think that that was a good quiz...bye! | Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: October 27, 2002 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this chapter...i think that it's one of the funnier earlier chapters...and it provides us with a nice break in the lemon...don't get me wrong, i love lemons...but reading chapter after chapter of it can be a little...monotonus...but not your...b/c in your lemon chapters, they contain valuable parts to the story plot, and i like how you've done that. bye! sarah | Reviewed By: Heerosgurl On: October 26, 2002 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, u are making a sequel?!?! Sugoi! I can't wait. lol. Keep posting! You are a great writer. By the way, maybe this had something to do with the Ranma idea, but when you had the 73rd chap up on ff.net, there was something about Yamcha's brother and a wandering syndrome...yeah. I haven't done (as in refrenced anything) for Ranma, which is what I normally do whenever I find a great new anime, so I don't know about the...wandering thing.
SO! If you could e-mail me to just quickly clarify, you can e-mail me at lunarianprincess2789@hotmail.com, or if it will be revealed later, that's cool too.
Keep posting/writing!
~Heerosgurl | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] |
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