| "Restraints and Liberations" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:59 EDT
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*grins* Do you mean "Talon" or "Turles"?
Turles of course. ^__^ At 3:oo in the morning, I'm prone to making mistakes. ^___^ *blush* Also, I left excerpts at my lj, in case you're interested *end of blatant plug* |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Progress indeed. ^__^ I'm so happy that he's coming out of his shell. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:30 EDT
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*grins* Do you mean "Talon" or "Turles"? |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs profusely for poor Sage* That was so sad, but painfully good. All I kept thinking was, "Talon would make a good Saiyan father." Was I wrong for thinking that? O____o? I can't wait to find out what will happen when Sage arrives safely at home. How iwll Vegeta and Kakarott react to their son's return? Drama I am sure will abound! You have me glued to this fic. *reads on, mouth agape, eyes in a dreamy wonder* |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, Talon! ~,__,~ That was so good! Poor little child! I'm glad that I read this because if I hadn't the similarities between this chapter and The Master Becomes the Slave would have been frightening. They already are, and I do believe that I am trying to find excuses not to finish it at all. *Kaia tears out hair* Why didn't anyone tell me?
*Oh stop babbling Kaia!*
Okay, I really enjoyed this chapter. I wanted to hurt the gel broker for doing what he did to that young Saiyan male. And Turles, how good of him to take the child away from that horrible place.
When ever I read a fic, I know that its good if I get drawn into the story, and this fic was EXCELLENT. I can't wait to read the other chapters! ^__^ I will leave a review for each of them, because as I've said before, that's just the way that I am. Good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Shisou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 19:19 EDT
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*holds out a plate of cookies* My offering in awe of this fic.
*grin* You know.. I think I'd pay to watch you hose them both down. But are you sure Miju and Sage wouldn't enjoy it too much? |
Reviewed By: The Unforgiven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 13:21 EDT
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Great job on this fic!!!!
I love it. and hope to read more of it ^_^.
Sage is soo Cute. |
Reviewed By: Princess Emeraude On: August 09, 2003 19:02 EDT
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*blushes* Oh, thanks for dedicating a chapter to me too! My lil neko won't let me not review...
*Neko Sage snorts and mews loudly, shakes tiny head*
So very cool that Sage has finally come home. *smile* I hope there will be more chapters and more of Sage very soon. *nods*
Maybe Mrs. Briefs in the form of a saiyan priestess could help him deal with what she has gone through also? *Neko Sage bites Princess's ankles* Ouch!!
Okay!! I'll keep my ideas to myself. *tiny Neko Sage grumble mews* Probably wants to be in it too...silly neko! *Mews in protest* *glares at Princess*
I guess he just wants more of Sage. *tosses Neko Sage his favorite Baka plushie to cuddle up with* *Tiny neko falls asleep sucking his tail* |
Reviewed By: Moon Baby On: July 22, 2003 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! PLease keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 22, 2003 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for yet another chapter in an ever increacingly excellent work of literature. |
Reviewed By: Princess Emeraude On: July 22, 2003 01:17 EDT
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The best one yet!! *claps hands*
Neko Sage..*squack!* Mew!!
*gives Muses goodies and treats*
I hope the next one has Sage meeting his parents and brothers. *hopeful look* |
Reviewed By: Moon_baby On: June 26, 2003 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic... cant wait to see how sage will react to being home again... please dont keep us waiting too long |
Reviewed By: Demetz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:36 EDT
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Nearly 2 months and no UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: Anon On: May 16, 2003 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its almost impossible to find writers with talent who are well informed enough to make a credible fic. you are one of the most talented writers i have found. update soon. i gotta find out what happens |
Reviewed By: Myself On: May 11, 2003 03:19 EDT
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More more more more more more MORE |
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