| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I like! Very much, in that hentai sort of way...yeah. And, the plot was good! All in all, job well done! |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOH VERY VERY NICE!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I so can't wait for the alternate chapters. I loved the last line especially. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin On: June 21, 2002 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story was fantastic! I loved the ... he he he ... "bonding." ^_~ Oi, I'm such a hentai! But she didn't get to play with his ... tail. I can't WAIT for the "alternate chapters" heh heh heh. OH, if you still have the update list then please add me at: duonotsuin@yahoo.com This is one of my fav V/B get together fics! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Bri On: June 20, 2002 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tsk, tsk, tsk...I loved it! I loved it SO much (and I dont even like lemons)! What else can I say, besides I loved it?
~*Bri*~ |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is a nice little ficcy. The whole story was well paced, and almost addictive in its quality. It was very well thought out and a fun twist to the usual B/V get together. Good work! ~Ember~ |
Reviewed By: Julien (a.k.a Trunks) On: May 09, 2002 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was quite a funny fan fic and enjoyed it. I love manga and anime and think that it is the best. I think reading what happens next would be cool so don't back out. |
Reviewed By: Jade Dragosani [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo... I liked that. Hmm, alternate chapters, I don't know. I think just continuing were you left off would be great! Or maybe writing a sequeal or something. IT CAN'T END THERE NEEDS MORE!! Anyways, haha. I liked it.
Blessed Be,
Amy |
Reviewed By: saiperus On: April 04, 2002 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so beutiul makes ya just wanna slap veggeta on the ass. |
Reviewed By: VGETEA On: April 25, 2002 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know your writting!
I think you did very well at writting this fanfic
very well done |
Reviewed By: Whitehero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2002 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up. :) |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2002 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor veggie that was so sad when she rejected him, in the end it turned out very good. I loved it. And now Trunks will be born and grow up to be the hottest guy in DBZ. Gomen veggie pplz, BUT Trunks is so much cuter then him but I must say I like B/V better then T/P or T/M and those yoai ppl with nasty minds T/G *cringes with disgust* anyway i loved the fic it kind of reminds me of the song: Leather by Tori Amos. Love the fic you out to enter that contest on m.m. fic page. you'd win for sure.
loved it,
:)mizuP |
Reviewed By: Makoto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never been moved so much by a fanfic! The way Vegeta struggled with his emotions are so true to life. I even feel myself having those arguements with myself at times. Overall the story was steamy and sexy, but at the same time innocent and sweet. I loved your story and I hope you will contniue to write more of them! |
Reviewed By: BadWarriorGrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i hav read the whole story "The Bet" and i hav to say u are a very talented writer. i liked ur writing very much. i hope u write lots more ;) |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definently a great story, but does it have to end this way or will there be a sequel to this story? Please let me know if there will be. |
Reviewed By: helmetguy On: March 23, 2002 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HOOOOOOOOOOO! Great story, hahha! I love the 'baby bit'cool |
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