| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACH!!! You get back here this instant!!!! I feel so bad for Vegeta. Bulma thinks he is still playing and he's falling for her. Ooooh very very kawaii. Loved it very much. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2001 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am begging on my hands and knees for you to hurry and post the next chapter! Awesome fic! |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i can't believeu did dat to veggie-kun in the last chapter!! *weeps* i feel so sorry for him! T_T i mean... from the sounds of it...they're bonded...rite?? o and one more thing... were u kinda hyper wen u wrote the first half of this chapter?? |
Reviewed By: Ami Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i can't believeu did dat to veggie-kun in the last chapter!! *weeps* i feel so sorry for him! T_T i mean... from the sounds of it...they're bonded...rite?? o and one more thing... were u kinda hyper wen u wrote the first half of this chapter?? |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe poor vegeta ;) an angry saiyan is just as good as a frustrated saiyan! this is so creative, it had me raising my eyebrows! i can't wait to see what you come up with next! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 22, 2001 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already read this phenome of a fic on another website, and it is one of the best B/V get togethers that I've ever read. You, and you alone, are responsible for ever single cold shower that I had to take while reading this story. I won't say what happens so that everyone who is reading it now can wait in agony like I had to for the final chapter. I'm not trying to be mean, it's just that it's worth waiting for. Bravo seiya for a fic extremely well done! Peace |
Reviewed By: Feline On: November 29, 2001 06:10 CST
Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic of you and cannot await the next chapter!!!
but-I WANT THEM TO FUCK!!!!
*ssssssssssssssssssssssss...* |
Reviewed By: Malenka Saramahki On: November 25, 2001 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now, you seem to be on quite a roll. ^_^ I love the situations you have these two in. So, what's next for Bulma and Vegeta while they are handcuffed together? Hmm..... we can only wonder while you work your magic. |
Reviewed By: Steph On: November 25, 2001 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! You are so evil hahaha!! I absolutely love this story!! I have never read something like is and be as good also! You are a true genious!! So you have other stories? If you do I would definatley like to read them. So where are they ne wayz? I thought you said you had a ff.net accout right? So what is you author's name?Anywho...you have to bring out the next chapter a.s.a.p. and I mean it! LOL keep up the good work and if you have time email me K? Thanks buh bye~
much love,
•Bulma (lol)
•a.k.a.Steph |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2001 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD!! I love this so much. Vegeta is just being so cool and cocky and the sexual tension is just so thick. Very cool. ^_^ I can't wait for the next part. Hmmm, Ice Cream sounds good to me. Chow!! |
Reviewed By: star12 On: November 22, 2001 01:41 CST
Comment/Review:
great story keep writing!! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: sakura On: November 22, 2001 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this cuz it's a very cool pic please! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGHHHHHHHH! YOU MUST POST CHAPTER 10!!!!!!! this is great, i litterally screamed when i finsihed chap nine and saw nothing else...PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: LeChibiUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very very good!!!! puh-lease keep writing! it's killing me that their's not another chapter to read. please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: ami-chan On: October 29, 2001 14:34 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo u have to continue this!! hehehe. GO... i don't even no who to cheer for... |
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