| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
| Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Poor Vegits. I feel so bad for him. Anywho, I loved the chapter and Goku is just so adorably naive. I hope you post more soon. Onegai? Chow. |
Reviewed By: Ouji [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 00:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Haha, I am so stupid. I saw my review. I mispelled LOSE. There goes my credibility. My mistake.
- joVEnGETA |
Reviewed By: Ouji [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy? I really do E-N-J-O-Y reading this "Get Together Fic". Well, I assume that is how this will all end. Everybody knows that. Still, This piece never fails to titilate and tickle me at the same. Good Stuff. FEW, grammatical errors. That's all there is to it in the downside. On the good side, where do I start? On second thought, where do I stop? That's enough. I don't want to stroke the author's EGO anymore. Heheh... Can't wait for the next chapter. If you ask me, the saiyan no ouji will loose. Anyway, it's just me. CIAO.
- joVEnGETA |
Reviewed By: Sean On: January 17, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic but its a bitch having to scroll side to side every 2 seconds |
Reviewed By: Gaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please, put up another chapter. You can't just leave it at that!!! smile
Gaia |
Reviewed By: Gaia On: January 14, 2002 05:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I have read a lot of fanfic about this couple and I must say, that your's the most intriguing so far. Please continue, I would like to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting deep. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: SSJ-Vegeta On: January 12, 2002 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was so sad what happend to Vegeta (tear) please give them a good ending |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 11, 2002 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who wouldn't feel sorry for Vegeta in the state he's in right now :((sniff) Anyway back to reality, It seems that the bet is off/ if not for the time being. So...seeing that they'll end up in a wonderful relationship(by Vegeta's standards at least)See if you can spice things back up once Bulma's gotten the chance to say sorry. Doing a good job so far keep it up. Can't wait 'til the next chapter(s). |
Reviewed By: ss vegeta On: January 11, 2002 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to right more it was so saddd what happend please make them finish with a good ending well peace and keep writing |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 11, 2002 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a goooooooood chapter do you have to stop please you must keep going!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 05:08 CST
Comment/Review:
!?!?! poor vegeta!!! please have bulma make her apologies SOON or i think i'll crack! loved it as always! :) |
Reviewed By: hachitajhii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait till the next chapter
be blessed |
Reviewed By: hachitajhii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait till the next chapter
be blessed |
Reviewed By: Jes On: January 01, 2002 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you have to get the next chapter up please!!!!!!You so left me hanging there!!!poor Veggie!!!!!!Great job!!keep it up!!! |
| Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] |
