| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: TRUNKS' LIL BITCH On: July 23, 2003 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u lil BITCH how could end it like that and you havent even started on your other chapter hurry up and write more!
sorry about calling you a bitch |
Reviewed By: slayer77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, even though i only read one chapter, too lazy to read all :) |
Reviewed By: sesshomaru lover On: January 24, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good story!!!!!
I want to see the alternate stories ^_~ |
Reviewed By: nikki On: November 30, 2002 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seiya,omg, let me tell you! i am crying because after trying to find this story since ff.net took it off, i have finally found it! this story is the shit!!! i love the way you wrote it. hard-core details, fun to read and everything. i love it!!! |
Reviewed By: NYLACE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was great!!!!!! You must continue this story....Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to take a cold shower |
Reviewed By: Gohan sj3 On: August 23, 2002 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was one of the best b/v fan fics out there. you are amazing!! if you have any more wicked stories like this one please don't be shy to post them. i can't belive how rich this story was filled with candy coated goodness! ^_^ well keep it up u rock!! |
Reviewed By: chibionna On: August 01, 2002 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! this was great! i have never seen a fic done like this before, its definately original! but you have to write those three chaps, i mean its august already! |
Reviewed By: Britt Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOO! IT CANT STOP NOW!!! *cries* |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I found this while searching the site. *Sighs* Oh I just love it!! Old ideas are always the best you know. ^_^ PLZ CONTINUE!! *Sits And Waits* |
Reviewed By: majickdragonofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an overall interesting Fic. It was able to amaze me and keep me interested. I'd recomend other fics from you, if they're as good as this. |
Reviewed By: Emeraude On: July 16, 2002 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your story! it was just soo good.every chapter you read, made you want to keep on reading it. at a point you thought everythin would come to an end but didn't. It keep me wanting to read and read it. I can't wait till u make more stories. |
Reviewed By: Michelle On: July 09, 2002 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before you said that Bulma wanted to find out what Vegita's tail felt like. Well...She never did find out did she. |
Reviewed By: ruah8r On: July 09, 2002 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of writing 5- because lemons are not my fav.
Spelling & Grammar 9- Didn't notice any mistakes.
But I probably missed them.
Enjoyment Factor 6- Skipped some of the lemon scenes to see what happens next.
Overall Rating 7- Not bad, If I skip some of the lemon parts it makes a sappy, romantic, comdey, drama fan fic. *shut up brain or i'll stab you with a cuetip* stole directly from the Simpsons |
Reviewed By: anime_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! I LOVE THE STORY!!! YOU MUST DO MORE PLEASE!!! YPU ARE A REALLY REALLY GOOD WRITER AND SHOULD DO MORE *fan girl scream * I LOVE VEGETA SO MUCH!!! |
Reviewed By: anime_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the first chappy. I'm looking forward to the next. |
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