| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: helmetguy On: March 23, 2002 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWOOOOOOOOOOOOO! HOOOOOOOOOOO! Great story, hahha! I love the 'baby bit'cool |
Reviewed By: Koko Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2002 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
*lol* I rarely read DBZ fics, but this intrigued me... ^_^ Just read the first chapter, and can't wait to read the rest! ^_______^ Lovely writing. ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Courtnee On: March 22, 2002 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
*Eyes open wide* 3 endings!?!? OMG! That is so tyte! I read this one, and loved it all! Especailly the ending about the baby...How could you make it even better!???! I'll be staying in for the next chapters that are probably going to be a masterpice in their own. Love the story!! Keep it up for your viewers! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2002 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great ending! Can't wait for the alternates.-JB
PS. Congrats. on the most visited spot. |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great ending for a great fic please post the three other chapters soon! |
Reviewed By: hetchi On: March 21, 2002 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo! thanks for finishing it!! it was great! You should write a sequel! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 01:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Please please please please please post more soon! I love this fic, it's great! You can email me at emerald3852@yahoo.com to let me know about updates, I would love to hear when new stuff comes out. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: fingerlickingood6969 On: March 19, 2002 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Adam On: March 18, 2002 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it........... thats all i can say |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGH!!! Seiya!!! You get back here this instant!!! DARN IT I can't believe you leave me hanging like this. I want to see Vegita and Bulma make up. Such an awesome story. I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Onegai? *gives chibi eyes* |
Reviewed By: lulu On: March 16, 2002 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so awsome, u could actually have a picture in your head. Nice work. Please continue...please do. |
Reviewed By: Roxxy On: March 10, 2002 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!!! hurry with the last chapter.... this is SOO good...... i wish i were bulma..... its so romantic in a strange way..... HURRY!!!!!! GO GO GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Jodie On: March 08, 2002 03:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey your fic was really great, i really really really really love it a lot, there was some sad part which was sad though, anyways it reeally good so far. |
Reviewed By: Pickle On: March 01, 2002 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, its a diffrents story, not like all the others are, and i love how they act, its very funny, but your last chapter started to get a little mushy sounding and it doesnt go along with it to well, please keep writting |
Reviewed By: LeChibiUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2002 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10++++++!!! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE add me to your mailing list! I LOVE THIS FIC! HURRY AND PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTERRR!!!
email~ dmiklov1@maine.rr.com |
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