| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taro (again) On: February 26, 2002 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konichiwa, seiya_odango san! keep on writing! I am on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta. I feel so sorry for him. Well if Bulma won't love him I will. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: angeliz On: February 24, 2002 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
this fanfic was superb, i thought it was really well written, and i can't wait until you come out with your next chapter. the thought of vegeta actually trying to seduce ANYONE is hilarious, but you actualli make it work, and it is soo funny, keep up ur creative streak! i look fwd to ur next chp soon! |
Reviewed By: kandi On: February 23, 2002 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am really glad that you decided to upload more chapters. just please please finish it. i hate to see good litature go down the toilet just because its not complete. anyways i enjoyed it. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: February 22, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahoo, thanks for writing another chapter :)
I'll be happly waiting for the conclusion :) |
Reviewed By: J-Goddess On: February 21, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very orginal, you must finish it!!!!! PLEASE! I know you problably have other stuff to do, but think of your fans! We need more! |
Reviewed By: Kris On: February 21, 2002 12:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You can't end it there!! Gah! Please tell me you are posting more soon. Please! This is such a good fic, I can't wait to read more of it! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: February 13, 2002 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading hentai Vegeta fanfic :) And this was the best I've read yet! but don't stop at chapter 8!!!! It was just starting to become more complex! |
Reviewed By: LeChibiUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2002 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* OMG you are soooo good! My mom kicked me off the computer for being on too long, because I couldnt't stop reading!!! You have just GOT to keep writing this! I think I'll go crazy if you don't!!!! pReTtY pReTtY pLeAsE wItH sUgAr On ToP!!!
cheers! |
Reviewed By: Taro On: February 08, 2002 06:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best i've read in long time. Still think it was a bit cruel to veggie, but hey. write more, deffinately keeping in tune. |
Reviewed By: dragon_optic On: February 06, 2002 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow very graphic i like it plz finish quick i need to know what will happen next |
Reviewed By: LM On: February 03, 2002 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. i am begging you to write more. if you do please send to girldbz@msn.com |
Reviewed By: kandi On: January 29, 2002 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. i am begging you to write more. if you do please send to kandikisskiss@pordigy.net |
Reviewed By: Cortney On: January 27, 2002 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
*Gasps* CONTINUE!!! Please....you must! I'm hanging...I NEED to know who's going to win!!!! Lol, You've got me hooked. Please finish soon! |
Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Poor Vegits. I feel so bad for him. Anywho, I loved the chapter and Goku is just so adorably naive. I hope you post more soon. Onegai? Chow. |
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