| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: October 28, 2001 21:25 CST
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Y'know, my friends and I used to blow up condoms as balloons and hang them around the dorm rooms. We used to have pink ones..and glow in the dark ones..and ribbed ones..But I've never discovered any edible ones before! Laughter! My gawd you torment that lil Saiyan like nobody I've ever read before! Keep up the great work, ya fool!! |
Reviewed By: Mishka On: October 29, 2001 04:18 CST
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boy oh boy. I thought I was cruel, but you've taken it to a whole new level. I can't wait a whole week for the next chapter. I'm on the edge of me seat!
Poor old Veggie. The boy's got problems, huh. I nealry died laughing when he ate the condom though!!
You do realise that this story is a paradox in itself, don't you. I realise that things are getting "from bad to worse", but the story is going from good to better. It's so gripping. Keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 14:22 CST
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What can I say? I'm impressed. You have a wonderful talent for keeping people interested. You're also very inventive. Great job! |
Reviewed By: a schizophrenic On: October 31, 2001 16:25 CST
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I laughed, I cried... |
Reviewed By: Sansei On: November 01, 2001 19:06 CST
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Oh, this story has put the bulma vegita relationship on my list of favorites: specifically this one!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I am soooooooo looking foward to the next chapter. i didn't expect him to eat it. I was holding my breath during half of it and at other times, kaasan was asking me what was soo funny? LMAO!!!! |
Reviewed By: missmagick On: November 03, 2001 04:31 CST
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love it love it keep up the good work can't wait for more
P.S. dorothy must die lol |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: November 04, 2001 02:48 CST
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ok, i love the fanfic but hey can you atleast put up the next chapter on time, its the 3rd and theres no chapter 14 so hurry up im very impatient
:P |
Reviewed By: Imajineer On: November 04, 2001 10:57 CST
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An excellent and believable redition of the Vegeta and Bulma get together.
I really must praise the author on the ability to keep all the personalities in character.
Action, humour, drama and more galore. Something for everybody and not just for Bulma and Vegeta fans.
Remarkable work keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow On: November 04, 2001 21:50 CST
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I've been following your story for quite a while now, and I dub it "the best B/V fic I've read as of yet!" I really do love your story, and that means something coming from me! (I usually don't give out such generous comments! ^^) ANyway, as I was saying, I think what make this story so good is your grasp of emotional reaction. You manage to fit so many aspects of heart-wrenching behavior into the story. And who's to say the characters are out-of-character? It's your fiction, so therefore, for your story I say they're in-character! Hah! You include all sorts of little elements: angst, confu cion, even a little humor for us all! ^^ Good grammar too, by the way... I'm always searching for fanfics with this sort of *empty, haunting* atmosphere... How lucky I was to find this one! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Has Dr. Briefs cooled off any? Who was it that revealed Bulma's apartment to him? AHH! Hurry! I think I'll go insane if I don't get to read it soon! (This story's definitely on my fave list! ^^) |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 04, 2001 21:54 CST
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Oh, my gosh! I just reread my review and noticed all the TYPOS!!! Oh, well it's late... That's my excuse. I also forgot to comment on how I love how you present how he's haunted by his past. It's a refreshing potrayal... Okay, now I'm going for real! Promise!
G.S. Over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: November 05, 2001 15:22 CST
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Yeah, Yeah, I know that Chapter 14 got posted two days late. Blame MediaMiner.Org, not me. I always post after Midnight on Fridays and they were down at the time. Thanks to all of you who had the patience to wait, for the rest of you, get on the damn mailing list. Everybody else got a link on the third, as promised because this is NOT the only site I post this story on. |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: November 05, 2001 15:39 CST
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To the prick going around and lowering the ranking of this story and the others: If I find out who you are, I'm siccing my cadre of Hacker buds on your sorry ass and shutting you down. |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: November 05, 2001 18:11 CST
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I just LOVE this ficcy!!! Please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Juice On: November 09, 2001 20:24 CST
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Dark Angeles, your story is over done and over dramatized. Vegeta is way too out of character and it adds to the unoriginality. And don't you think the whole "at its best" is a little cocky? I really don't think this fic is that well done and by no means deserves a spot in the top 15. Fix it up and give it a story of its own that hasn't been done by a million other fanfiction authors and maybe I'll care. Might I add that your Halloween fic is good (not great), but you really need to let go of it. Halloween is over and people just don't care anymore. Be smart and write a Christmas fic. That way, it actually deserves to be on the charts before the holiday - not afterwards like your Halloween fic, which you obviousl keep rating up. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 09, 2001 21:01 CST
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To Juice: *HELL-oO!! fanFICTIOn=FICTION!!! Get a life! Writing is for creativity, and last time I checked, you could write about anything, it doesn't have to be "in-character"!! Regardless, of rather it is in-character or not, the story is written extremely well for its GENRE! Do you know what GENRE means? It means the "type"! Oh, yes! There ARE different TYPES of stories! *wow... Drama**, Angst** Humor**... yes, they're all different TYPES! (i'm being sarcastic, BTW.... -_-) I mean, I could write a lemon between...say ... MAster Roshi and Goku... and my writing and story might be *GOOD!! (but, I'm not going to do that because it's *sick...) But, the point is, I can, it's FAN*FICTION!
TO Dark Angelus: Flames can't burn paperwork on the net, keep it up! ^^ |
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