| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See? I knew that bitch was gonna put the moves on Vegeta. Damn her!! Well, at least Bulma and Veg are together again. Good chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, I knew we hadn't seen the last of that bitch! For a moment there I thought he had sensed Bulma. Personally I think she's gonna try to take advantage of Vegeta in the state that he's in. I hate her. Anyway, I don't think Dr. Briefs has a posse looking for Vegeta, but in the condition that he's in and after everything he's gone thru what else is he supposed to think. Btw that was some hallucination that Veg had in the forest. Good chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheer brilliance. The conversaton between Kami and Vegeta was fantastic, bordering on spiritual. I would pay to see Vegeta's face as he looked upon himself as a Super Saiyan. Yeah, this chap was great! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Vegeta wants to end it all. He must be in some serious pain. I love the fact that Bulma moved out in protest. Good for her. She's old enough to take charge of her life. Poor Vegeta, I wonder where Piccolo is taking him...to see Goku perhaps? Great chap. Loved the fight scenes too (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe what that bastard Yamcha has done, kind of like the domino effect. I hope that somehow, someway Bulma is able to find Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIT!!! Everything was going fine and Yamcha has to come and ruin everything. I say kill the bastard! Dr. Briefs is an idiot for listening to him. Didn't it occur to him that Yamcha was just plain jealous? Ugh!! I can't write anymore. I'm pissed!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. They're finally starting to be civil with each other, for the most part. There's something about that Dorothy that I don't like, and I get the feeling we haven't seen the last of her. Yamcha is really starting to get on my nerves and I can see now that he's gonna be starting something nasty. I just hope Vegeta kicks his ass into next week. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this chap had me crying. You captured Vegita's sense of hopelessness so well that my tears ducts couldn't take it anymore. No wonder Bulma falls in love with him. All he's ever known is hate, betrayal, pain and violence, yet his spirit and pride remain intact. The end to this chap was kind of like the calm after the storm. Awesome (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so all this time Vegeta had been working for Dr. Briefs. Amazing. Now Bulma owes him an apology. As far as Yamcha goes, will he create problems for Bulma to spite her for being more interested in Vegeta's welfare than in Yamcha's? Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out. Good chap (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, Yamcha must have a death wish to challenge Vegita like that. I guess you can't blame him though. I'd do the same thing if I heard Vegeta say things like that about a friend of mine. On second thought, no I wouldn't...I'm not that crazy. Gotta hand it to Bulma for sabotaging the gravity room. Someone had to curtail that idiot's masochistic tendencies to train when he obviously wasn't up to it. Again great chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start to your story. This is more like I would imagine Vegeta to be. Rude, caustic and with about as much charm as an ingrown toenail. I love Bulma's verbal dressing down, even though I think she overdid it a little. Frankly I feel a little pity for Vegeta. He is who and what he is because of his past life and experiences. Only someone with a death wish would say that to his face though. Anywho, great chap. |
Reviewed By: j-goddess On: February 22, 2002 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so long! But SOOO good! I hope you right another fanfic :) |
Reviewed By: mic On: January 27, 2002 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I read it start to finish in one day! Can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Kichi On: January 15, 2002 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it's so full o vegeta-angst! it's so great. i've been following it for awhile and was on your mailing list and i don't know if i ever left a proper review because my computer has too much stuff on the harddrive for things to work properly. but now i'm saying it. i LOVE THIS FIC!!! |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2002 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all miss you on FFN, and we're looking forward to the sequel to From Bad to Worse.
Sincerely,
Wanda Chan |
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