| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alleycat On: November 24, 2001 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is utterly amazing. It's got everything from blood and gore to comedy and action to romance and angst (along with a manipulative bitch and a rotting corpse), and everyone's just about as in character as they can be, considering the plot. I like how you've managed to show the intellectual, almost-softy side of Vegeta without squashing the angry, disturbed, bad-ass part. The storyline's wickedly creative and totally awesome, and your writing style kicks. I've found a lot of authors are good with either imagery and descriptions or dialogue and character interaction, but you handle both extremely well. And your English! *dies* Pretty damn close to impeccable. This story's got it all. You update regularly and frequently to boot (with nice long chapters, too!). This fic is most definitely among my three faves. I can't wait for the next chapter; the fight should be interesting (provided it actually takes place, that is). Ja ne~! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: November 24, 2001 16:26 CST
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Thanks for more great chapters and always updating so quickly. I don't know how anyone could flame this story (i was reading some of the comments since I last posted.) This is an awesome fic, and your writing style is excellent. You actually delve into the characters and you are filling in the gaps of their personalities. I give it an A+++ ;) Keep up the good work ;) |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Every chapter I read is more compelling than the last. The best thing about this fic is that you give them time to develop their relationship into something deep. It seems with every V/B fic out there all Bulma and and Vegeta do is argue and screw. That's it and most of the authors have to gall to say it's true love. All that is is a shallow relationship based on lust and hot-tempered attitudes: Hardly anything insightful or worth reading cause once you've read one, you've read them all. Totally not the case with your story. Every new chapter is something interesting and difference. Not typical garbage. I love their relationship, how it's forming, how they are really getting to know each other. It's so awesome. Now I just can't wait till Yamcha and Vegeta get it on, especially since Bulma seems too incapacitated to stop them. ^_^ This is getting so good. You are officially my most favorite author! |
Reviewed By: Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an excellent story. Very well written and more than worth the week long wait between updates. |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The interaction between Vegeta and Bulma seemed so real. The descriptions of his past were graphic, and gripping. Excellent chapter, excellent story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! remember me, good old 2nd commentor. i just wanted to tell you that your story is getting better and better and i'm very happy it's gotten the recognition it deserves. maybe mine'll get popular someday :P keep up the spectacular work. |
Reviewed By: Duo Maxwell On: November 22, 2001 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christ, I'm gone one month and everything goes to hell. Does this stupid place want my SIN number too? I gave you a good rating Darke, enjoy it! |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: November 22, 2001 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to justify my reason for Top TENS? This fic is the best, an' I'm gonna tell you why: Where else am I goinna find an original V/B get together story(that isn't at Capsule Corp!), where V. gets his ass canned, gets sick, has to prostitute himself to get to Bulma,has delusions of his cohorts, eats a bloody condom and gets to shag the gorgeous blue-haired chick of the series! Combine that with excellent spelling, cliff-hangers, chapters that are over 6000 words-each and a great style and you've got the BEST V/B story on this stupid site!!!!!!!!!!!!!You go, D.A.!! |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who hasn't written a Bulma/Veggie fic? The thing is, who is good at it? You sure are. |
Reviewed By: Nosehair On: October 08, 2001 15:05 CDT
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the writing is really really good but they're ooc!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelKali On: October 08, 2001 22:34 CDT
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awesome story. bulma and vegeta are just awesome characters, especially interacting with each other. it's quite amusing sometimes. |
Reviewed By: jterra On: October 14, 2001 14:13 CDT
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Excellent chapter, but it made me so angry to read it! That Dorothy woman must die! I want Vegeta to have her head - or maybe Bulma. She had better get what is coming to her. I can't believe Vegeta would sleep with that woman! She is going to have set him back so far. I'm glad Vegeta and Bulma are back together again though. You had better update on time! Anyway, very, very good job. Keep up the great work, and keep muddling through the OCC comments - I think you are starting to win me over. |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: October 15, 2001 14:03 CDT
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Holy shit!!! Poor ol' Veggie had to slut himself to get to Bulma! I want that Dorothy bitch to die (even if she IS just meant to be a female Vegeta)! At least B/V are reunited! Do I see a catfight in the future between B/D? That would be cool! |
Reviewed By: lenika On: October 20, 2001 00:41 CDT
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I truly enjoy this story more and more. I always look forward to reading the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lotus-chan On: October 20, 2001 17:01 CDT
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Good God, this just keeps getting better and better! I cannot wait for the next part. What an emotional trip... This is the most insightful, in-character Bulma/Vegita 'get together' fic I've ever read. Probably the best portrayed Dragonball Z fic I have ever read. Your skills as an author cease to amaze me. |
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