| "Through Thick and Thin" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 23, 2002 08:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww.... They're both found, and going home. *sniffles* I'm so glad...
So, now that Bulma's forgiven, what's going to happen next chapter? Will it be a... lemon? *covers mouth and giggles* Haha, you do what you want. Either way it'll be awesome.
Keep it up!!
~Alyssa~ |
Reviewed By: faye On: December 20, 2002 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the idea is good and I enjoy reading it,
so please i'm looking forward to see the chapter 7 available soon. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By Kami! This is a great fic! I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^^ -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: December 12, 2002 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I never thought the day would come that I was too busy to review... I only JUST managed to find time for this, so this is gonna be short.
Awesome chapter! Yes, Bra is a very bold girl. She should find her papa and bring him back! Make Bulma feel stupid .::snickers::.
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 10, 2002 17:12 CST
Comment/Review:
WOOOO!!! Go Bra!! Drag dat man's ass home!!
This is so good... amazing... *sighs* I'm so envious O.o;
I can't WAIT for the next chapter! Things really ARE going crazy!! Write, write, WRITE!!
Alyssa |
Reviewed By: Hard Candy Vegetto On: December 08, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AARRGGGHHHHHH!!!! Update! Update! UPDATE!!!
sorry.. but this is really good and you just left me there... hanging... -_-' |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: December 08, 2002 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
.::cries::. So sad!!
Question: Does a making a chapter sad and despressing make it bad?
Answer: No! Especially in this case!
This was a really good chapter! Now that Vegeta's gone, what are things going to be like? I want to know the same thing as Alyssa; will Yamcha show up? I hope not .::growls::. He doesn't deserve Bulma.
You also ripped us off of a lemon!! Vegeta's gone, so now we're going to have to wait even longer!! .::screams::.
NOW what will the Briefs kids do? WILL they succeed? I wonder... ^_^
Keep it up!
Zelda |
Reviewed By: Buruma_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 09:58 CST
Comment/Review:
really really good! i read this yesterday and noticed a few mistakes that arent in there now. i guess u caught them. plz update soon. i cant wait to see what happens nxet. |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 08, 2002 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams* No, Veggie, nooooooooo!!!!!!!! You CAN'T leave!! It's not ALLOWED!!
Heh...
Another awesome chapter, though, yes, it WAS depressing. But good nonetheless.
So now that Vegeta's gone, what's going to happen? How are Trunks and Bra going to solve THIS one?? Is Yamcha going to come into play? Update soon!!
Alyssa |
Reviewed By: Organic Power On: December 21, 2002 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs*
That has to be like, the saddest thing ever. Damn your making me drop the machismo. *sobs*
Very very beautifully written. :) |
Reviewed By: moonshine On: December 06, 2002 00:22 CST
Comment/Review:
great story so far! I can't wait for the next update!!! |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 03, 2002 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *breath* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
I fell off my chair laughing!
That chapter was too funny... God...
I can't WAIT to see what the presents are... What on earth did Vegeta get? O_o What would he want?
I can't wait until the next chapter. Are Bra and Trunks gonna get busted? *snickers* I hope so... the ficcie's going a little kop. ^.^
I hope your computer's up and running again soon... I can't wait for your next update e-mail... I'm totally hooked on this fic! |
Reviewed By: Tina On: December 02, 2002 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, that was cute ... "Bra! That's a bra!" LOL XD Although actually seeing men in lingerie stores isn't really that weird ... once I was at Victoria's Secret and there was this old guy who was ... er ... very thoroughly examining the corsets ... but especially around Xmas time, a lot of guys go and buy lingerie and stuff for their wives/girlfriends/etc ...
But newho, the rating should definitely go up in the next chapter!! And I can't wait to see what the presents are ... ^.~
Love,
Tina |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: December 02, 2002 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! And yes it was evil not to reveil the gifts. But any how, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 02, 2002 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm baaack!! Can't stay for long. Jet-lag *rolls eyes*.
What a great chapter... damn. *shakes head in disbelief* I can't WAIT for chapter 4. Post! Post! Post!!
Alyssa |
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