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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. Nice one. You even had me close to tears. Had to blink them away so I could enjoy the rest of your story. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: Meow On: April 07, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was good...definitely a unique idea for a story. You obviously have a lot of talent, and you write the characters well. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Kiaya the Dragon-half On: January 22, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best stories I've read in a LONG time.I'd like to tell you what my favorate part was,but I liked it all so much! It also says in one of your chapters that your in the eighth grade, me too! Your writing skills are WAY better than mine(concidering the fact that I couldn't write a story to save my LIFE).Keep your fan fictions commin'! |
Reviewed By: stars On: January 20, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your a great writer! And I absolutly adore your style of writing & creativity. A bunch of people have probably told you that already, so add me to that bunch of people! I mainly enjoyed reading it because I'm such a Vegeta and Bra fan and I'm sick of those people who can't write for SH*T!! But you do have a very good talent for writing... so, KEEP WRITING FICS!!!!!!! Thank You! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And they lived happily ever after...Ha! Ha! Fabulous ending. I couldn't help but add a fairy tale ending. It seemed like it deserved one! I'll have to say that you did a great job on this one Vegeta's Gyal. I definately look forward to your upcoming fics and I'll keep a mental note of your screen name so I can read every fic that is labeled by you. You are one of the greatest authors I have seen in a LONG while! |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: December 29, 2002 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Though I'm saddened by the fact that this fic must end, I am ecstatic that it was written, and that I was lucky enough to stumble across it.
It was extremely well written, with a beautiful flow and an original plot.
The epilogue was amazing. Length has nothing to do with anything. It was... amazing! I can't find another word.
I can't wait for you do catch up on your other fics. Your writing is like a drug; I'm completely addicted.
Your all time BIGGEST fan,
Zelda |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 29, 2002 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet. I bet it was Bra's best birthday ever. You did such a super job with this. For me it brought back memories, both good and bad. What a great fic!! Happy New Year!! |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 29, 2002 13:22 CST
Comment/Review:
It's... over? *wails* NOOOO!!! Write a sequel! *about what, Alyssa doesn't know, but has the confidence VG will think of something*
That was... short, but really good. I like how you made it in the future, like a reflection. And it's good to know Vegeta cares. You let us know he's proud of BOTH his kids, yet still kept him IC. It takes true talent to do that.
Amazing story, Keruri. This is definitely one I will re-read.
~Alyssa |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 28, 2002 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!! what a wonderful story! i really liked it. Excellent job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Organic Power On: December 28, 2002 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.
Really, really well written. Very tasteful. Very well written.
This is a joint review, I guess, of the two chapters.
7 was good. I liked a lot, although an iota of Vegeta's dialogue seemed a tad off, it was very good on the overall, and washed out any flaws.
8 was just as good, if not better. Like I said, very tasteful and well written. One of the best written lemons I've ever read.
Good job, Gyal. *bow* |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWwwwwwww Great story!!
you're 13?? O_O
That's a really good lemon for someone your age. REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD IN FACT!!
I'm older and I can't even write sometime CLOSE to that good!! ^^ Great job!!
Loved the story.
Really related to me....but....not really a happy ending!! ^^" Parents still together at least!!
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 27, 2002 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a chapter. Whaddaya mean nothing much happened. Sweet love is what happened and it was beautiful. Sorry that I didn't review every chap, but I was so taken with reading that I forgot to review every time. The whole story was excellent and mirrors what happened at my house when my bro was Trunk's age. Great fic and I can't wait to read the last chap. Happy Holidays! |
Reviewed By: Hentai Geek On: December 27, 2002 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
amazing. truly amzing |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 27, 2002 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
*blinks and rubs her eyes* I think I have some lemon juice in my eyes, too... *blinks some more*
You're right, not much happened, but we've finally got that lemon we've been waiting for!! And a great lemon, at that. A lot of people rush through it, don't take their time. One of their lemons would be:
"Bulma took Vegeta's cock in her mouth, sucking. Vegeta screamed her name. Bulma rolled over, and Vegeta entered her."
Add some spelling mistakes and more porn talk, and there you have it! But yours wasn't like that at all. It's almost like you've done it before O.O (excuse me for saying so). It was so... realistic. Amazing work. One of the best lemons I've read. You really should write more. They're great. ^_~
~Alyssa~ |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: December 27, 2002 16:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I'm back from Christmas ^.^
Great chappie ^.^ Vegeta and Bra are found and heading home. How sweet... and what a relief. Whew! |
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