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Reviewed By: Zelda On: November 29, 2002 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIRTEEN!!!??? .::falls over dead from shock::. I don't believe it! You're just too good to be thirteen...
Anyways, another awesome chapter. I think no release dates are better. Though we, the readers, will have to keep coming back to check for updates, I think the chapters will come out more often, which, IMO, is better.
I can't WAIT to see what's going to happen. What a pair of evil lil plotters, they are, though I'd have to say it's for a good cause. Keep it up, Gyal! This is amazing! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ryAngle7 On: November 28, 2002 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awww, this story is so good. I like how you change the setting of emotions from time to time. Great story and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: November 26, 2002 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your writing style and the way you make the readers feel what the characters feel. I also like the fact that this is a holiday fic and keep up the great work.
P.S. Don't get hung up on meeting your deadlines as long as you finish. That's what's important. |
Reviewed By: Organic Power On: November 23, 2002 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOTALLY FRIKKIN' UNBELIEVABLE!
Even I, who despises anything slightly related to love in DBZ fics, (Ugh... linearity) enjoyed this fic greatly!
First off, the description was spot-on. One problem that I had with a few of your previous writings was the major inconcsistency in description. In one line, I'd be shocked at how well you described, but in the next, the description was almost non-existent. This was entirely different. It seemed to be an unbelievable spectacular bonus.
You had short simple sentences during the fights; you had drawn out descriptions during the mundane scenes; everything in between was done--well--in between! I applaud you for the great description in this! :)
Characterization was good. It feels so Vegeta. ;) I really like the way you did this, but this universe's Bulma sounds like a real bitch! Can't wait to see how it all turns out! :)
The plot was wonderful! I mean, I've read B/V fics over and over AND OVER again. To the point where I look for the nearest assault rifle to put me out of my misery. But I was greatly enticed by the premise of this particular fic. I can't say that I didn't enjoy it enourmously. I mean, I had a smile on my face virtually thoe WHOLE TIME I was reading it! :) Great originality! :)
Amd, overall, I just wubbed it. ^_^ Great job, Gyal. :) You have me hooked, though I hate B/V's usually. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Buruma_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is really good! next friday is to far away! can you please e-mail me at buruma2000@hotmail.com when you update? thanks.
~Buruma-chan |
Reviewed By: Jesscheaux On: November 22, 2002 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL 10s yeah!!!! I really really enjoyed this fic. One of the most original I have EVER seen and a very interesting subject. I adore Vegeta :) :) :) And I cant' wait to see what happens. Nice choice putting it around Christmas. I LOVE THIS FIC! Keep up the great work! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fic very well writin and story line is exclnt |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: November 21, 2002 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... I'd say that there's a problem. I feel bad for Trunks, all the Briefs' actually. Having to deal with this this close to Christmas.
You updated early, just like I'd asked. Not really early, but early enough. At least I don't have to wait until tomorrow. You never answered my questions, though... I'm assuming you forgot. Don't sweat it ^_^
Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: November 21, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, AWESOME!!
I'd say that's a real problem! Jeez.. I love your summary... that's such an awesome sentence:
"Have I ever been one to make a joke?"
No, Veggie-chan you haven't. ^_^ If I were Trunks, I probably wouldn't sleep at night either!
Well, I can't WAIT to see what happens, VG. Update sooooooooon!! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Wowsa! You're fic is really impressive. I can't think of anything to reccomend costructively...Oh well, I just tell you that it's great!...Oh, and keep writing too! |
Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 21, 2002 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is absolutely not fair to leave me hanging like that! Hurry up and keep writing! I really admire your creativity. |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: November 18, 2002 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing fic, just as I had expected. Yes, it is a little early for Christmas fics, but I can understand your reasoning.
As I mentioned in another review, I adore your writing style. I'm curious to know: do you read a lot? Also, if you don't mine my asking, how old are you?
There were no spelling or grammatical errors that I caught, so good work there.
Unlike most other B/V fics, this one is completely original. I haven't heard of or read another anything like it. It becomes difficult after a time to come up with original B/V fics. You simply begin to fall into the cliche. But this one is creative and well-written.
The twenty-second is too far away. .::pouts::. Do you think maybe you could post it a couple days early? I'm sure there are many eager to read more.
Ciao! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting development so far. They're both being a bit unreasonable. That's nice, it's not a "Bulma must reform Vegeta" fic. I hope they can work it out. :) |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks promising. I can't wait to see how you write the rest of it. |
Reviewed By: Zelda On: December 03, 2002 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
What were the gifts!? WHAT WERE THE GIFTS!?? .::rips hair out and runs around like an insane man::.
That really sucks about your computer; I'm with Alyssa, I can't wait for it to be repaired. And MAN was that chapter FUNNY!! .::cries with laughter.::
Please update as soon as possible. I can't WAIT to see what happens next, not to mention what the gifts are ^_^. |
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