Reviewed By: Alyssa On: November 12, 2002 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! The first review! As soon as I got your 'update' e-mail, I came here to read your fic!
I love it so far. Yeah, it IS early, but it's nice to know that Christmas isn't as far away as you think ^_^.
Favouritism... Ugh! Vegeta! Why can't you just treat your damn kids equally!? -_-; I'm kinda glad you picked favouritism as the argument topic; it's not just some stupid quarrel because he ate all the food, or something. It's about a real issue.
I'm really interested to see where this is going. I would say 'update soon', but if you meet your deadline, then you will have updated soon... o_o So, um... just e-mail me again when you've updated this fic.
Great work, Vegeta's Gyal!
Alyssa |
