| "Illusions of Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: ToxicHathor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i may not agree to Seto being the bad guy but this is AWESOME!!! i usually write Yami/Seto stuff but this is so cool. but why didn't you update for so long? i hope you didn't abandon the story, anyways keep up the awesome thing, Hathor.
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Title: it's been years...
Reviewed By: thenotsologedinccam3 On: July 05, 2005 10:38 CDT
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it's been years...u ganna finsh...?
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Title: ok it's been years
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 03:07 CDT
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FINSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 17:05 CST
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Holy crap! That's eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil Kaiba! Did you actualy kill Yugi? O.o Oh well! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: AuroraIce On: September 06, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Wow!! I really like this version of IoD as well! I read the one on ff.net, you see... O.o Please don't tell me that Yugi was the one that was dying in Domino Hospital...
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Poor Yami-kun!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!! Die Kaiba!!! Die!!!!
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Title: WHY?!
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 19:59 CDT
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Why the hell do you not continue this fic?! come on, I know you can do it, so do it!!!, please? o.o, see a!
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Title: Hooo!!
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 12:31 CST
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That was Evil!!! And I relly like it!, hope you continue!
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Title: Hooo!!
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 12:31 CST
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That was Evil!!! And I relly like it!, hope you continue!
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Title: Hooo!!
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 12:31 CST
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That was Evil!!! And I relly like it!, hope you continue!
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Title: Poor Yami and Yugi.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I feel so bad for Yami, why didnt Jou get to him sooner? *sigh* I hope Yugi is going to be okay. PLease continue I cant wait till the end. Its really good.
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Title: ...... Ahhh!!! Yugi!!!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 23:23 CST
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Oh, no!! Yugi... Is he.. No! It can't be!! Say it isn't so!!! And Yami!?! Oh! The pain! The agony! The anticipation of having to wait to see what'll happen next!! Are Yugi's lungs filled with blood from Yami's stab wound? What's gonna happen to Kaiba?! Ah!
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Reviewed By: YamiNShadowsGirl On: February 11, 2004 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why have you stopped (Yami is my favorite character but for some reason i love seeing him in pain wierd huh)ive been waiting for ages for the next chappie you have to carry on i want to see what Kaiba does next after all i doubt he is just gonna sit there and let them take his toy away from him hes bound to try and get him back oh and i dont think you should pair Yami up with anybody arter all if hes been raped numerous times im sure a relationship is the last thing on his mind just make him have a close relationship with someone (frienship terms) and also it would be a nice change if Yami was straight for once (just a suggestion) oh and i like the determination Yugi has about gettin Yami back it seems likely for him after all he does care for him a great deal anyway update asap i want to see what happens next im thoroughly enjoying this
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Reviewed By: Kriss On: November 15, 2003 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEKKK! How evil! I absolutely loved it!!! You really caught me up in the story, and I want to read more.....NOW!!!! LOL, so you absolutely MUST get on to writing the next chapter! Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 08:03 CST
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Oh my God! She killed Yuugi! Kyle: You Bastard! Wow! I can't believe it! It's been so long, but as soon as I checked my email this morning I was overjoyed! This takes me so far back. It was one of the fics I read back in my early fan fiction life and I love it now, just as much as I loved it then. I suppose there are two ways one could continue this. They can take Yami to the hospital, but it will be very hard to explain things I imagine, especially if he doesn't have his own identity. Or they can take Yami home and try to sort things out there. I also imagine that Sugoroku will have to get involved here at some point, seeing as the two teenagers that live with him are hospitalized and missing. And I suppose Ryou could contact Bakura through the Ring and tell him about Yuugi. Okay, that's all I can think of right now. I'm going to go read that chapter again. I LOVE this story!!
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