| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shiari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 21:26 EST
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::dies:: you hafta update noooooooooow!!!!!
;_____________; |
Reviewed By: specialness On: December 12, 2002 22:36 EST
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i looooove thiss fic and u havent updated in a crazy long time.....I NEED MORE!!!!! pllzzz update soon... |
Reviewed By: ladyflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait for the next installment. Such an original idea, I can honestly say, that I've never seen the Inuyasha cast, set in the alternate universe of Ai no Kusabi before, but I like it!!! I like it LOADS!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 21:34 EST
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this story is so great! and really original, i think you're doing a great job and i really want you to update soon... i've been checking to see but you haven't and that makes me sad... *sniff*
Mara |
Reviewed By: judut On: December 03, 2002 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, hope you update soon.Unusual fic, cute and fun! |
Reviewed By: obsession171 On: November 27, 2002 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaaaaaaaa!!!! Nice, veeeeeery nice. *ecchi grin* Melikes greatly. *suggestive wink* More soon? |
Reviewed By: foureyedbookworm On: November 27, 2002 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a great story! I'm foureyedbookworm; you can find my story on fanfiction.net, which also happens to be where I first started reading your story. It's really, really good! Such an original idea, with a totally different setting! I've never read any other Inu-Yasha AU's which use the same setting or plot. The uniqueness of this fanfic makes it all the more interesting! You write with great style and description, making the reader practically feel like they were in this world. I absolutely love the way this story is going! I can't wait to read more! Continue writing! Ja ne!
P.S. More lemony goodness would be nice, too! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: derf n bob On: November 24, 2002 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although you mentioned that this wasn't entirely original and that the world is from a book, i still think you adapted it very well. You made the class system work. i also read this fic on ffn and wow it is sooooo much better here!
heh heh im a blondie good fic and get more chapters out! im loving this fic |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this chapter on ff.net. Chapter....4 is it? Damn, you're a good lemon writer!
This was very lovely and I can't wait for more (on both sites). Um...I can't really
think of anything to say about this except that it is exceptionally written and I love it.
Anata |
Reviewed By: =D On: November 21, 2002 18:14 EST
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me likey!!!!! update pleeeez!!!! you owe us 3 more chapters!!! goood ficci!!!!! mwahhaha ok yes i will b cheking bak for updates |
Reviewed By: Starsweeper On: November 21, 2002 13:06 EST
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Well well now...i see we have decided to update...jeez for a sec i thought you were dead or something...sigh ~_^ well glad to see your up and kicking and getting that danged chappy out. Sigh...i like reading the uncut versions though...so i might just be seeing ya here. Also the fanfiction.net version was really bothersome to read. Sigh...but great chappy...FINALLY SOME INU X KAGOME ACTION!!!!!!!! YAY okay i'm happy now. Get that next part out soon. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 23:27 EST
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ooo, what's in the box! what's in the box?! *bounces up and down like a little chibi* |
Reviewed By: Jessica Chang On: November 19, 2002 05:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm...let's see i LOVE THIS FIC
i read the editted version on ff.net but this was 1,000,000,000 times better (thank you thank you thank you thank you )i can't believe that this is all that you've got out here though (wants the part two of this story)can you e-mail me when the next part is out ?changjessica2x5@yahoo.com i still think that this is the best and i have read ALOT of lemons before!!!so once again thank you thank you thank you
Chang Jessica
"Stupid pepole shouldn't breed"Chang Wufei |
Reviewed By: Kota Magic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 02:42 EST
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Damn! THis fic's just one lemon after another! But at least it's got a plot, not like alot of the crap out there. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Saya415 On: November 19, 2002 00:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH~! Hehehe, I'm glad you decided to post it here ^________^ Can't wait for the second part of Bonding! So update soon!! |
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