| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: CrimsonYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 09:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe....I LUVED IT!!!! Your imagination is wondrous. I can't wait to read somemore. In fact, the only reason I registered right now, was because I mainly wanted to comment on you. ^_^ I don't know if the rating is believable, but to me, those are the adequate numberings.
Great JOB!!! Hope ya continue soon. |
Reviewed By: SilverFox On: March 12, 2003 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my god that was such a good fanfic!!! I love how you made your own style and how Kagome was the 'pet' I can't wait for the rest of the fic ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aika_Bankotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! The lemon scene was incredibly detailed, and even though it's AU, Inuyasha's in character. The way you added Kikyo was ingenious, too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Valron On: February 09, 2003 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot so UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmm its been way too long since u updated so do it or i will go phycho [:| |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 04, 2003 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! People who rag on NC-17 'fics should read ones like this -- the ones that actually have plots and writing!
As disturbing as I found part II to be, I have so many questions...
Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru don't seem to know that they're youkai! Sess seems a little out of character, a little more sadistic than the real Sess, but the fact that anyone not an android is thought of as "human" explains why he would be interested in a human woman.
So ...Inu Yasha doesn't know he's a hanyou, has never been treated as a hanyou outcast, and doesn't have a hangup about it! Cool! Was Inu Yasha's mom still the same woman we saw?
I can see how we might never run into Miroku, Sango, Kouga or Naraku, but does Kag still have her powers? Might be cool for her & Inu to find out that she has (eheh!) more than one use... I notice that Sess and Inu don't have their powers either. Something to do with the moons? |
Reviewed By: nekochan614 On: February 08, 2003 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing... very well written...
the basic background could use some work - its a little confusing at how the society is set up and the deal with the jumpsuits |
Reviewed By: kaede_chan On: January 19, 2003 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool storyline --very unconventional. i especially like the pet concept. (smiles) keep on writing, kay? i'll be keeping close watch for updates. |
Reviewed By: kaede_chan On: January 19, 2003 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool storyline --very unconventional. i especially like the pet concept. (smiles) keep on writing, kay? i'll be keeping close watch for updates. |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, update, update, update, *pant, pant* UPDATE!!! Please! This story is too damn good to leave hanging! For the love of Inu Yasha PLEASE UPDATE!
Lill |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really all i can say is wow.
This is one of the best inu/kag fics ive ever read. we can only hope you havent 4gotten about it and update soon!
updating makes readers happy!
kirby too! |
Reviewed By: zeek On: January 02, 2003 03:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I love this fic and please finish soon. And you make a great lemon pie as for me I love lemon fanfic so please put some more.You did great.
zeek |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 00:26 EST
Comment/Review:
waaaaai, you still haven't updated!!!! i check over and over and i get no cookie!! (that's a metaphor for update) pleeeeeease!! update!
Mara
ps, if you're having probs with writers block and stuff email me and maybe i can help you
onejoy1@pobox.com |
Reviewed By: RainiSunshine On: December 22, 2002 15:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. ^^
really did. i hate how ff.net did the restrictions!ugh, so not fair!but its great neway!
i love this fic, and the chap is...(how shall i say..) tangy?lol.
ja ne |
Reviewed By: Harvey Bautista On: December 30, 2002 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a pretty solid fanfic. The Inuyasha clique of fanfiction always does fascinates me... as does this interesting monsters-human, masters/slaves caste relationship in some stories.
Interesting alloy of two existing works of fiction. The 'Furniture' remind me of the Janissaries; a slave caste which were sometimes castrated, except they revolted eventually.
This is odd... Inuyasha's main conflict is mainly making sure that his brother never has justification to send him off for re-education... which now enfolds Kagome as well.
No Shikon no Tama or large quest to go on... simply to maintain the status quo to outsiders. Great premise... I guess I'm a real hentai to be... erm... 'intrigued' by the Kagome/Inuyasha relationship done to the subservient/manipulator angle... but whom is who?
I'm also glad to see that the NC-17 community lives on...
Sesshomaru seems to have too much power in this... or rather, Inuyasha simply does not have any influence in his family's organization. Does he have a future in whatever business they are in? A position which would garner him enough affluence/power/social standing that he can ensure Kagome remains at his side?
Right now its the absolute passion and bonding mode... I worry about the couple however later on in the story. You pegged Sesshomaru as a Sadist in this story. Sure he was so damn pompous and contemptous in the series... but this Sesshomaru seems to take an enjoyment out of tearing people a new one.
Have you brought up Inuyasha's parentage yet? One of my predictions based on the series is that their father left Inuyasha a legacy or inheritance that Sesshomaru needs. But of course that would be sticking too close to the actual series...
Harvey Bautista
harveybautista@yahoo.com |
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