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"Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ]
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 Reviewed By: foureyedbookworm  On: November 27, 2002 18:33 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a great story! I'm foureyedbookworm; you can find my story on fanfiction.net, which also happens to be where I first started reading your story. It's really, really good! Such an original idea, with a totally different setting! I've never read any other Inu-Yasha AU's which use the same setting or plot. The uniqueness of this fanfic makes it all the more interesting! You write with great style and description, making the reader practically feel like they were in this world. I absolutely love the way this story is going! I can't wait to read more! Continue writing! Ja ne!

P.S. More lemony goodness would be nice, too! ^_^
 Reviewed By: derf n bob  On: November 24, 2002 19:53 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
although you mentioned that this wasn't entirely original and that the world is from a book, i still think you adapted it very well. You made the class system work. i also read this fic on ffn and wow it is sooooo much better here!
heh heh im a blondie good fic and get more chapters out! im loving this fic
 Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2002 04:04 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just read this chapter on ff.net. Chapter....4 is it? Damn, you're a good lemon writer!
This was very lovely and I can't wait for more (on both sites). Um...I can't really
think of anything to say about this except that it is exceptionally written and I love it.
Anata
 Reviewed By: =D  On: November 21, 2002 18:14 EST
Comment/Review:
me likey!!!!! update pleeeez!!!! you owe us 3 more chapters!!! goood ficci!!!!! mwahhaha ok yes i will b cheking bak for updates
 Reviewed By: Starsweeper  On: November 21, 2002 13:06 EST
Comment/Review:
Well well now...i see we have decided to update...jeez for a sec i thought you were dead or something...sigh ~_^ well glad to see your up and kicking and getting that danged chappy out. Sigh...i like reading the uncut versions though...so i might just be seeing ya here. Also the fanfiction.net version was really bothersome to read. Sigh...but great chappy...FINALLY SOME INU X KAGOME ACTION!!!!!!!! YAY okay i'm happy now. Get that next part out soon.
 Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2002 23:27 EST
Comment/Review:
ooo, what's in the box! what's in the box?! *bounces up and down like a little chibi*
 Reviewed By: Jessica Chang  On: November 19, 2002 05:07 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ummm...let's see i LOVE THIS FIC
i read the editted version on ff.net but this was 1,000,000,000 times better (thank you thank you thank you thank you )i can't believe that this is all that you've got out here though (wants the part two of this story)can you e-mail me when the next part is out ?changjessica2x5@yahoo.com i still think that this is the best and i have read ALOT of lemons before!!!so once again thank you thank you thank you
Chang Jessica

"Stupid pepole shouldn't breed"Chang Wufei
 Reviewed By: Kota Magic [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2002 02:42 EST
Comment/Review:
Damn! THis fic's just one lemon after another! But at least it's got a plot, not like alot of the crap out there. Good job.
 Reviewed By: Saya415  On: November 19, 2002 00:47 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH YEAH~! Hehehe, I'm glad you decided to post it here ^________^ Can't wait for the second part of Bonding! So update soon!!
 Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2002 20:38 EST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW! WOW! this was really hot and steamy, and I loved it. Hope you get to write more soon.
Please I'm liking your fic very much
 Reviewed By: Jess  On: November 18, 2002 19:30 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting fanfic!! Please continue soon!! Will this be a happy or sad ending? How many chapters had you planned for this fanfic? ^_^
 Reviewed By: kmf  On: November 18, 2002 16:50 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fantastic lemon, very enjoyable. Cant wait for more of this original story ^^
 Reviewed By: yaya  On: November 18, 2002 16:37 EST
Comment/Review:
omg..i read ur fic sumwhere else...4got..but iv been awaiting foe u 2 update...luv ur story line
 Reviewed By: ela  On: June 23, 2003 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this fan fic!!!! prob is is that it hasnt been updated for a LONG time...please update. im asking nicely... update now....NOW....or else....*grins evilly*
 Reviewed By: MaliceYam  On: January 01, 2003 13:31 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey this fic wasn't half bad. Its actually the best Yasha and Kagome fic of this nature I've read so far. Keep up the good work for SURE! And I'm really looking forward to Bonding Part II. ;)
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