| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: nekochan614 On: February 08, 2003 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing... very well written...
the basic background could use some work - its a little confusing at how the society is set up and the deal with the jumpsuits |
Reviewed By: kaede_chan On: January 19, 2003 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool storyline --very unconventional. i especially like the pet concept. (smiles) keep on writing, kay? i'll be keeping close watch for updates. |
Reviewed By: kaede_chan On: January 19, 2003 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool storyline --very unconventional. i especially like the pet concept. (smiles) keep on writing, kay? i'll be keeping close watch for updates. |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, update, update, update, *pant, pant* UPDATE!!! Please! This story is too damn good to leave hanging! For the love of Inu Yasha PLEASE UPDATE!
Lill |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really all i can say is wow.
This is one of the best inu/kag fics ive ever read. we can only hope you havent 4gotten about it and update soon!
updating makes readers happy!
kirby too! |
Reviewed By: zeek On: January 02, 2003 03:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I love this fic and please finish soon. And you make a great lemon pie as for me I love lemon fanfic so please put some more.You did great.
zeek |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 00:26 EST
Comment/Review:
waaaaai, you still haven't updated!!!! i check over and over and i get no cookie!! (that's a metaphor for update) pleeeeeease!! update!
Mara
ps, if you're having probs with writers block and stuff email me and maybe i can help you
onejoy1@pobox.com |
Reviewed By: RainiSunshine On: December 22, 2002 15:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. ^^
really did. i hate how ff.net did the restrictions!ugh, so not fair!but its great neway!
i love this fic, and the chap is...(how shall i say..) tangy?lol.
ja ne |
Reviewed By: Harvey Bautista On: December 30, 2002 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a pretty solid fanfic. The Inuyasha clique of fanfiction always does fascinates me... as does this interesting monsters-human, masters/slaves caste relationship in some stories.
Interesting alloy of two existing works of fiction. The 'Furniture' remind me of the Janissaries; a slave caste which were sometimes castrated, except they revolted eventually.
This is odd... Inuyasha's main conflict is mainly making sure that his brother never has justification to send him off for re-education... which now enfolds Kagome as well.
No Shikon no Tama or large quest to go on... simply to maintain the status quo to outsiders. Great premise... I guess I'm a real hentai to be... erm... 'intrigued' by the Kagome/Inuyasha relationship done to the subservient/manipulator angle... but whom is who?
I'm also glad to see that the NC-17 community lives on...
Sesshomaru seems to have too much power in this... or rather, Inuyasha simply does not have any influence in his family's organization. Does he have a future in whatever business they are in? A position which would garner him enough affluence/power/social standing that he can ensure Kagome remains at his side?
Right now its the absolute passion and bonding mode... I worry about the couple however later on in the story. You pegged Sesshomaru as a Sadist in this story. Sure he was so damn pompous and contemptous in the series... but this Sesshomaru seems to take an enjoyment out of tearing people a new one.
Have you brought up Inuyasha's parentage yet? One of my predictions based on the series is that their father left Inuyasha a legacy or inheritance that Sesshomaru needs. But of course that would be sticking too close to the actual series...
Harvey Bautista
harveybautista@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Shiari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 21:26 EST
Comment/Review:
::dies:: you hafta update noooooooooow!!!!!
;_____________; |
Reviewed By: specialness On: December 12, 2002 22:36 EST
Comment/Review:
i looooove thiss fic and u havent updated in a crazy long time.....I NEED MORE!!!!! pllzzz update soon... |
Reviewed By: ladyflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait for the next installment. Such an original idea, I can honestly say, that I've never seen the Inuyasha cast, set in the alternate universe of Ai no Kusabi before, but I like it!!! I like it LOADS!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 21:34 EST
Comment/Review:
this story is so great! and really original, i think you're doing a great job and i really want you to update soon... i've been checking to see but you haven't and that makes me sad... *sniff*
Mara |
Reviewed By: judut On: December 03, 2002 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, hope you update soon.Unusual fic, cute and fun! |
Reviewed By: obsession171 On: November 27, 2002 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaaaaaaaa!!!! Nice, veeeeeery nice. *ecchi grin* Melikes greatly. *suggestive wink* More soon? |
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