| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: zeek On: July 09, 2003 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey when will you update I can't for the next one don't forget to put more lemon in
zeek |
Reviewed By: zeek On: July 08, 2003 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey when will you update I can't for the next one don't forget to put more lemon in
zeek |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 23:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this fic...u hafta update soon please |
Reviewed By: hishiro On: July 01, 2003 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, I liked the whole Pet thing....very interesting where you took that too.... |
Reviewed By: sweetsuzylue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great write more please ps why did you not have inu yasha kill sessy for what he did |
Reviewed By: Neko Warrior On: June 09, 2003 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm not sure if you even look at the reviews at this point but i'm gonna say that I enjoyed reading what you've written and hope that you might one day add part two to bonding. If you actually read this email could you please email me at chibihakusan@aol.com Thank you for your time. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, what a fic! Good character set up (For an AU, very in character!), a plot line, good world setting (even if it isn't yours). OH, and the lemon! I know that I'm going to be finding a cold shower when I'm done writing this >P More of a sensual feeling than one would expect from a dom/sub culture that you have, but I'm not complaining. |
Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 00:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everythings good exept for the enjoyment factor. The things that I really didn't like were the parts with Ses/Kag + Inu/Kik. Those I loath! I was totally disgusted at those parts! Sry for that, I'm just a total Inu/Kag fan. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 14:43 EST
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And I noticed something else -- I like the way that Kagome seems starved for information. In the anime and manga she's always studying, but in this world she probably hasn't had much exposure to real academics. It's cool how she's so enthusiastic about learning even simple things. |
Reviewed By: CrimsonYoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 09:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe....I LUVED IT!!!! Your imagination is wondrous. I can't wait to read somemore. In fact, the only reason I registered right now, was because I mainly wanted to comment on you. ^_^ I don't know if the rating is believable, but to me, those are the adequate numberings.
Great JOB!!! Hope ya continue soon. |
Reviewed By: SilverFox On: March 12, 2003 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my god that was such a good fanfic!!! I love how you made your own style and how Kagome was the 'pet' I can't wait for the rest of the fic ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aika_Bankotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! The lemon scene was incredibly detailed, and even though it's AU, Inuyasha's in character. The way you added Kikyo was ingenious, too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Valron On: February 09, 2003 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot so UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmm its been way too long since u updated so do it or i will go phycho [:| |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 04, 2003 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! People who rag on NC-17 'fics should read ones like this -- the ones that actually have plots and writing!
As disturbing as I found part II to be, I have so many questions...
Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru don't seem to know that they're youkai! Sess seems a little out of character, a little more sadistic than the real Sess, but the fact that anyone not an android is thought of as "human" explains why he would be interested in a human woman.
So ...Inu Yasha doesn't know he's a hanyou, has never been treated as a hanyou outcast, and doesn't have a hangup about it! Cool! Was Inu Yasha's mom still the same woman we saw?
I can see how we might never run into Miroku, Sango, Kouga or Naraku, but does Kag still have her powers? Might be cool for her & Inu to find out that she has (eheh!) more than one use... I notice that Sess and Inu don't have their powers either. Something to do with the moons? |
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