| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Title: Have not heard from you in quite a while
Reviewed By: SakuraWolf26 On: July 23, 2004 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you have so not updated this in such a long time.My question is how did you come up with this story?I mean what made you write it?But I am really glad you did write it cause It is great.Please update this very soon.I really hope I do not have to wait such a long time again but can you blame a person?I mean I am lazy with updating my stories. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* you finally put up a new chapter! I am so proud of you and please put the next one up asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts crying over wonderful fan fic*
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Reviewed By: Aewi (not login) On: July 22, 2004 12:33 EDT
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Yeah! I'm really happy to see your update after waiting almost 2 years! Love your story so much! And please don't let me wait so long again >.
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Title: Clouds are not related to marshmellows...in any way...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! (it has been so long...), the cliff hanger really left the feeling of a big horrid..."Uh oh..." Wonder what is going to happen next?
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen (won't let me log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 10:59 EDT
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(bows deeply) This thing is just as good on reread, Elora. I look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: July 22, 2004 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really really good! I loved your lemon! Believe me its really good. I love the whole idea of kagome being the pet for inuyasha but i cant believe that god damned mother fuckin seshomaru for doin what he did to poor kagome. I mean i love seshy but what he did was so very wrong.I mean come one i know he had to do that but i mean how come inuyasha could inspect her instead.Once again I LOVED the lemon. You know i wish that someone would write one where inuyasha is the pet/slave and kagome would buy him....i mean ive read only one like that and i wanna read some more damit!!! sry i didnt take my medication this mornin!! hehehehe ^_^ Neways i liked your story and i hope you update though i dought u will sence u havent sence 2002 lol so it was good readin this story and its a shame you wont continue cuz its really really good!!
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Reviewed By: Serenity's Angel in Heaven On: July 19, 2004 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was a great lemon version! Have u read Mariangla "When He Was Mine"!? it's an Inuyasha fic too! Please post Part 2 very soon and don't 4get to give the URL if its gonna b on this site again! Hopefully u'll write more Lemon versions and lemon chapters very soon! luv ya!
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Title: Where's your muse?
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 19:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, Its been quite some time on an update from this eh? Perhaps well get one soon? I hope everything is ok, since it HAS been so long. Perhaps your muse needs a good beat down?
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Reviewed By: jen(not signed in) On: June 23, 2004 18:44 EDT
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wuts banter?....oh well....i love yur story! ^_^...and very original idea!!....update soon!
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl On: April 28, 2004 22:38 EDT
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vvery evil with those cliffies but please update
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Reviewed By: lilipegasus On: April 15, 2004 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really great!!I love the story line and how you write. I hate cliffhangers so ppplllleeeaaassseee hurry with the next chapter. Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: Hottewitabody328 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic!!please hurry hurry UPDATE!!i CANT WAIT ANY LONGER!!!
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Reviewed By: march 2004 On: March 26, 2004 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey up date all ready are you alive dead if so somebody who alive let me know if she dea or not. i want to see what hapends next put more lemons in it to.
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Reviewed By: Lemon lover On: March 19, 2004 16:59 EST
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please please update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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