"The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: helenaiko On: February 23, 2003 18:46 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this fanfic!!! please continue. i am sure you don't want to disappoint your many fans and keep them waiting ^_^. in some twisted way, this is more romantic than most fanfics that i have read... looking forward to reading more! |
Reviewed By: lasingparuparo On: February 21, 2003 23:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you write really well! please hurry and put up the next chapter! i want to see if sess will give up his pride and grovel on his hands and knees to kagome! |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's mate On: February 21, 2003 18:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I gave you a nine because one you make your sentence's a bet to long and only half of it printed on on the paper why can't you make it like how you did on the first chap wat I mean is you can have the chap as long as you like but dont make so we have to move it back and forth and then down jus make it so we jus go down Well that's all I have to say. Oh and if u do want to be Palls then E-mail me at Molokaians655@yahoo.com or Let me know when you update well Jamata De sayonara |
Reviewed By: luv me On: February 15, 2003 21:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is my fav. fic that i have seen on inuyasha so i please! write the next chaps asap! Love the story, continue writting! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Write more!!!!! On: February 08, 2003 20:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved it! When ya gonna write more?? I hope you haven't stopped this story, that would be a shame. :( |
Reviewed By: mai On: February 09, 2003 04:50 CST Comment/Review: update soooooooooooooooonn please.. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn On: February 09, 2003 04:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am very impressed by your story. And I know what it means to hit writer's block and I am also a perfectionist when I write stories. I loved the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome and I hope these two people hurting inside can find love and peace with each other. Although I do like Kagome and Inuyasha togehter, Sess/Kagome is my next most favorite pairings. I hope we get to read the next chapter soon! I can't wait. Please hurry! |
Reviewed By: hehe On: February 11, 2003 19:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome story! I hope your writer's block will pass soon! Please!!!! Update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Kit Wang On: February 12, 2003 20:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey hey! Kool fic really. I felt sad for Kagome but oh well!! She got the spunk to stand for herelf sometimes! Keep up the good work! Hope to read another! or a next chp or this one! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Umi On: February 14, 2003 00:35 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I adored this fic! I've never been a fan of Sess/Kag , but after reading this, I have to say maaaaybe it doesn't have to always be Inu/Kag {altho they're still awfully cute together! ^_^} and i always love it when someone can make a contemperary story work! GREAT JOB!! =D |
Reviewed By: hershey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 18:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SOO GOOD!! PLEASE write more SOON!! I BEG YOU!!! i'm REALLY hoping for some Ik/K action. (ALOT actually!) |
Reviewed By: chubbies [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 04:29 CST Comment/Review: pleease you really have to update. this is one of the first kag/sess stories i've read, and probably the one that got me stuck on that couple. I realllly wanna know what happens, so pleeeease update soon! |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 18:24 CST Comment/Review: I love this fan fic, but I think you need to do what you need to do. Take care of yourself first, and everything else will fall into place. Take care!
~Eri |
Reviewed By: kistune princess On: January 23, 2003 22:34 CST Comment/Review: pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee update im dying to see wat happens |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: January 21, 2003 13:49 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a really good story and I like all the drama but why does Kagome have to be nuts...Most People don't Argue with there Selvs like that |
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