| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 201 ] |
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Reviewed By: Soccer05 On: January 18, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very well written story. I really liked it and wished you would put up the other chapters soon. I hope that they will be as good as the first ones that are up. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is........................
more, more, more ,more, more, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you
BYE;p
obssesivefangirl sgining off!!
PeAcE BaBy yeah;}
i have so many PrObLeMs O.o O.O o.O |
Reviewed By: Laihiriel On: January 15, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Ello, MiniMorr!
I am really enjoying your fic so far. While the characters are OOC, it fits with your writing style. The actual style is very well done; it grabs the readers and makes them want to know more. I gave you a 7 for spelling and grammar because there were numerous typos and either fragmented or run-on sentences. Though not found as fequently, there were also a coupla awkward sentences or misused verbs, etc. It is a very creative fic, with just enough lightheartedness to balance the dark. I really love what you have done with Kagome; she makes a very good tortured, lonely soul. I hope that she and Sesshomaru hook up in the end because both of them have such intense emotions. I usually don't go for the Sess/Kag stuff, but your worked. UPDATE!! I NEED CLOSURE, DAMMIT!!! Lady Laihiriel out ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hekate On: January 15, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Absolutely love it, I think the way you interpret the Sess/Kag relationship is very nice. To tell you the truth, I love all your fics. I think you should keep going, just take your time and don't over work yourself...
No suggestions just keep writing the way you do!! |
Reviewed By: kistune princess On: January 14, 2003 21:43 CST
Comment/Review:
i like this story it's really geeting intersting pleeeaaaaassee update
p.s u pock the best pairing sessh/kag perfect |
Reviewed By: chubbies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 05:09 CST
Comment/Review:
i loove how you made sessho in this fic, i jus love sess/kag stories ^-^ Please, please, please finish this story!! |
Reviewed By: totalspazmo On: January 03, 2003 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a wildly absorbing fic. Your Kagome is way OOC, but that's cool because the Kagome you've created is really interesting. I can forgive you anything since you give great Sesshoumaru (but I haven't had to as you're coming up with some great stuff!).
Your character/plot development is good, and this is one of the few stores I've read where the lack of updates is driving me insane. Please. If you have the tiniest shred of compassion in your soul, please finish this! |
Reviewed By: Melissa On: January 02, 2003 02:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!! Couldn't tell that you had writer bloack when you wrote that..it was fantastic please continue soon..haha I guess I better get to bed now! night night! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: MidniteSugar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 05:40 CST
Comment/Review:
oH!!!! this is soooooo good!!!!!where the rest?!?! I need the rest!!! I've been here since 7 pm reading this it's now 3:46am *yes yes I'ma slow reader!!!* but WOW GoOd JoB!!!! I loVe it!!!! keep up the gReAt work :) |
Reviewed By: Araya Nattawat On: December 30, 2002 15:24 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good, but I feel sad for him. i hope some way Sesshou and Kagome can work things out and end up together. ^_^; Love the story. Plz upload the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Endless Reverie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep on writing I really love your story! I hope to read the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Rei On: February 13, 2003 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic! It's really quite good! |
Reviewed By: Lea_D On: December 28, 2002 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic... It's a good way to put sesshoumaru (sp?) and Kagome together. I liked the way the characters stop and think of what they're doing and so on and so forth. So keep them coming ok.. bye!! |
Reviewed By: SNOOPY On: December 27, 2002 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
* for those of us w/no life*
:cough:(me) >did you hear something?
: turns and walks away: |
Reviewed By: KawaiiFryingPanChick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 08:51 CST
Comment/Review:
OH! I remembered! (she's slow folks) One time I missed kissing my bf, but he got my ear instead of my lips...not quite so cute...Anywho, writers block sux but at least you don't have the chapter 5 curse. As soon as I write 5 chapters, even if I plan ahead, it gets me. Well anyways, thats all. |
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