| "Falling in Love a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Swtxlilazngrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 17:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv dis story, i sorta think ish kinda funny especially how ironic vegeta was acting in here compared to the episodes. i like it, plz update soon even though u jus updated 2day.. hehe... ne wayz i jus think that the title would b betta if it was called 'amnesia' but dont mind me. i like ur title now, im jus saying. sorri bout da rambling.
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Reviewed By: backcracking kitty On: December 16, 2003 07:31 PST
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This was just filled with writing goodness with a sugar-filled center! I just absolutely loved it! You're awesome, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixMageFire On: March 09, 2003 20:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Vegeta’s eyes widened in bafflement, he suddenly knew what it felt like to be Kakarrot."
I LOVE this line! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 18:38 PST
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I finally got to reading this this weekend, and it was a great story. I really liked how you wrote in fragments of Bulma's memory, and of course how unusually sensitive Vegeta was to the whole situation. I really felt badly for him! The whole mixup with everyone thinking Bulma slept with Yamcha was pretty funny, as was Goku & ChiChi's surprise appearance in their bedroom. Ha ha! I've got to get caught up on the prequel now to see how these two got together... :) |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 16, 2003 01:39 PST
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I think you had one more chapter's worth to really complete this, it felt kinda rushed.
I thought since you had Vegeta telling off Goku about his unexpected visit into his bedroom in the old version, you should've had Bulma telling off Chi-Chi (at her house) after everything she had seen when she and Vegeta re-bonded and saw what happened after her accident and how Chi-Chi was so determined to make sure Vegeta stayed away from her. It's obvious in the story that she wasn't too thrilled with the idea of Bulma and Vegeta together, and should've known that Yamcha would consider the accident as an opportunity to try and get her back. |
Reviewed By: kainee (kainee1984@yahoo.com) On: February 10, 2003 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!! I was right... you do have 2 more fics that you've written and posted on FF.net but that you haven't put up on Mediaminer! Post them!
Okies. That demand aside... Post!!! Dammit!
Sorry for the cursing... but man! You're a good author(ess?)
And one upside on Mediaminer that I think is preferable over FF.net... You may get waaay more reviews at FF.net but not all of them can be useful... Plus Mediaminer doesn't go down as much as FF.net |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:58 PST
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lol well in between waiting for chapters to come out for falling in love for the first time i decided to come read the one that started it all. awsome man...... but oh boy do i see the other fic going on for awhile more. lol not that i'm complaining. both fics are excellent. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kat On: February 05, 2003 09:44 PST
Comment/Review:
I like your updated version. Your writings have always been one of my favorites...
:) |
Reviewed By: Nikeie On: January 26, 2003 16:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...great... no, actually the story's kewl. great. good. fantastic. wut the hell, WICKED!!!! |
Reviewed By: amberwaves On: January 21, 2003 11:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was excellent. Characters are great, story is great! I was nearly in tears with Vegeta's speech about finding love and losing it again. I'm glad I got to read it when it was finished... it would have killed me to wait. |
Reviewed By: AuroraGloryAlice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 20:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved the ending!! Woohoo! Great story! |
Reviewed By: Akuneta On: January 08, 2003 15:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!
that was the most beautifully written lemon i've ever read!!!!!! i almost cried!!
i'm at chapter nine right now, and i ABOSOLUTELY HAD to tell you how unbelievably stunning it was. i have been enjoying every moment of your fic. you are an amazing writer.
(only thing i suggest is that you tyr not to switch tenses in your narratives.)
WOOOOOEEEEEEE!!!!!! FANTABULOUS!!!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 07, 2003 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I loved this so much! Truly an excellent job! |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: January 07, 2003 17:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was WONDERFUL!!! It really captured Vegeta and Bulma's relationship perfectly. I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you so much! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 17:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was really good!! ^^
But honestly, I liked the first version alot better. =(
Your writing is still incerdibly amazing, but this didn't seem as enteretain and emotional as the first one. Plus the other version was longer, had some more funnier scences, and if I remember more lemon!! ^^ If you still have it, I reconmend that you post it as well!! ^^
CONTINUE WRITING!! ^^ |
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