| "Falling in Love a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 20:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this so many times!! I keep checking every half hour incase you have undated yet!! Please undate soon!!! I this is excellent!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: veggiegurl On: December 15, 2002 21:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thats a good fanfic.KAN YOU HURRY AND WRITE WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER.(sowwi)ok im cool just hurry i wanna readd!! |
Reviewed By: nikeie On: December 13, 2002 14:21 PST
Comment/Review:
great story. stop making Vegeta suffer!! he's a great guy!! so repeat after me: STOP...MAKING...VEGETA...SUFFER!!!! thank u if u do, which u better or else.... |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 05:09 PST
Comment/Review:
How does Trunks remember the years before his parents weren't technically together? Permanent memory doesn't start until you're about seven years old. Saiyan memory works differently? Or is this something that you'll go into in 'Falling In Love the First Time'? Anyway, no probs here with tenses. I see you've removed Vegeta's "heart attack". Enjoying the re-write, can't wait to see what is still familiar and what has changed. |
Reviewed By: Dot On: December 12, 2002 20:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!! |
Reviewed By: Stephanie On: December 11, 2002 19:24 PST
Comment/Review:
I first read this story when ff.net allowed NC-17. I loved it then and I love it now. Continue writing, your stories are absolutely wonderful -Stephanie |
Reviewed By: Jacob K. On: December 11, 2002 18:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. That's all that needs to be said. Can't wait to read moreof this. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 21:52 PST
Comment/Review:
awwwwww
I love this fanfic
After reading this over 100 times and counting I'm not sick of it. And I won't get sick of it!! ^^
CONTINUE |
Reviewed By: Saki On: December 10, 2002 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bitchin' story. Poor Bulma and Vegeta. He really loves his wife and wants her back. Very nice angst added. Can't wait to read more of this. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 17:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really good, I have enjoyed reading!! Please post more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Bigin' On: December 08, 2002 18:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would so suck to be vegeta at this moment. Poor fellow. Pretty good story so far, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: soup4themilitary [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 07:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic; I cannot begin to estimate how many times I have in fact, read this fanfic. The story is so great, and so well writen. Are you still going to do a mailing list? Do you need new betta readers? If so,, my email is supercoolash2002@hotmail.com . Please email me if you want my assistance! UPDATE QUICKLY!
*Soup* |
Reviewed By: astron On: December 07, 2002 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! i absolitely loved it! and ive read so alot of these stories b4. and even though it is jsut the begining i love it! i think it will b one of the bests o have ever read..so please continue. and fast. i cant wait to read it again! please hurry! bye |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 13:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo! I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!
I read it like 100 times on FF.net
^^
CONTINUE SOON
I forgot if it was you or not, but did you write a story called Beyond Reach? |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 13:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, that was so sad!! I can't wait to see what happens next when Bulma wakes up ... |
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