| "Falling in Love a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 11:13 PST
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VampireGoddess= whoa thats was ..whoa! great so far but..but....you need to finish!! ahhh!! i need to know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Toni On: December 24, 2002 10:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma can't fight her natural feelings. She'll end up with the man she's supposed to be with. Besides, Vegeta would blast Yamcha or any man to HFIL! :P |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 20:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay I'm glad they are back together!! That was a really good fic!! I think you should consider writing another few chapters!! Please think about it! well done! |
Reviewed By: Linda On: December 23, 2002 17:05 PST
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Wow, very excellent. There's only one thing that bugs me though - "losing" is spelled with one 'o', not two. Other than that, it's great. Your original version was good too, but I can definitely see the improvements. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 07:21 PST
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Phew ... I'm very relieved ... at first I thought Bulma and Yamcha were going to ... you know ... and I was very worried ... but they didn't, so it's all good! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Karena On: December 22, 2002 13:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta needs to beat Yamcha down for taking advantage! I hope Bulma remembers soon. Love the angst and romance. |
Reviewed By: Bra On: December 22, 2002 13:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yamcha, you jerk! Hate him so much. Anyway, fabulous chapter as always. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 21:04 PST
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wow, another excellent chapter!! This is really a great story, I love it!! PLease dont delay the next chapter update, I can't wait!!! Well done, this is truely excellent!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 10:18 PST
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Ahhh! I hope Vegeta follows them, and kicks Yamcha's ass when he tries to seduce Bulma! (Maybe he won't, but I don't trust Yamcha further than I can throw him!!) |
Reviewed By: Usagi On: December 19, 2002 09:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So impressed by your fic. The angst is at the right amount and you have me actually feeling sorry for Vegeta?! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 01:34 PST
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damn I meant to type 6 not 8 sorry!! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 01:33 PST
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wow! That was a good chapter (8) please write more soon, this story is really good!!! |
Reviewed By: siamsuperman On: December 19, 2002 00:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most creative and imagianative story I have read to date. I NEED MOORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 15:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what is Bulma going to do when she finds out what Vegeta really means to her? Hopefully she will already be falling for him!! Update SOON! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: December 17, 2002 15:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect! I could read this over and over again. |
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