| "Falling in Love a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: Much love and praise
Reviewed By: sugarcoated_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2015 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, more love and praise for you LavenderGoddess! Thank you for
revisiting this fic and making it even better. Even after all this
time we are still enjoying your fics! I did enjoy the originality
of this fic! I think other fics that you've written gripped me more
but I was amused by the obvious humor in this story. Little Trunks
is too adorable
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Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2015 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally finished it! Sooo happy i read this, i loved the humor
especially and lemons too ;) trunks was so funny in this story and
i loved the chemistry between bulma and vegeta, and who can forget
about chichi, she was perfect in this story! You did an outstanding
job, you deserve an award for this :D this story made my day and is
one of my favs
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Title: Team Bulma!
Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2015 12:35 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So in chapter 9 i was feeling bad for vegeta, you know losing the
bond between him and bulma but then they had sex[i enjoyed reading
i might add ;)] and then i thought it somewhat got better for
vegeta but my hopes were denied when i read the title of the next
chapter: "Regret" I was very apprehensive about reading it cuz i
knew it wasn't going to be good. Anyway i read it and my jaw
dropped, that opening scene had me mad as fuckkkkk. How dare
vegeta! So i truly enjoyed bulma's arguments toward vegeta.
Everything she said was on point and correct. Man vegeta was such
an asshole to her!!! like too much of an asshole where he doesn't
even deserve her!!!! Now im happy that vegeta feels like shit, its
payback for all the hurt he has caused bulma in their past! Clearly
im team bulma here lol "When" things improve between bulma and
vegeta i would like to see an apology from vegeta for everything he
has caused bulma, but i highly doubt that bulma will get one :/
sucks but anyway truly enjoyed those chapters, great work again! :D
cheers
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Title: Great Stuff!
Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2015 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Whoa that first chapter had me holding back tears, i wasn't
expecting trunks and vegeta to be the cause for bulma's coma. And
that second chapter, man talk about FUNNY lol! I swear i love
chichi in this story she wasn't backing down for nothing to vegeta.
You go Girl! ;) and when Trunks's was like: "How could you try to
kill Mom?!" "You did try to kill Mom!" (ROLF) And then when the
group looked at yamcha supposedly as the father of trunks XD Gotta
give credit to Android 18 for the idea of the dragon balls! i was
shocked to find out that vegeta had acquired a replacement GR (smh)
after all that happen too...I wonder if vegeta will ever apologize
to bulma for it being partially his fault that she ended up in a
coma? i would hope so! we all know trunks feels guilty thats
obvious. Amazing story,very intriguing! On to the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 17:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I'm a huge fan of yours. I hope u still read your reviews. Hopefully someday you will come back and finish your other fics. |
Reviewed By: saiyan_gerl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 00:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story idea was very original and perfectly in character! I loved the interactions with Trunks and Vegeta, especially when Trunks had to call him by his name instead of Dad. This was a perfect follow up to Falling In Love For The First Time, which I admit I read that one first even though it was the prequel.
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Reviewed By: mulattogurl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 02:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best fics i have ever read, and lets just put it this way...i've read MANY fics ^_^ The idea for the story was GENIUS and the portrayal of the characters and their feelings was AMAZING!! i was instantly hooked by this beautiful story and i read it all in one sitting!!!! please keep writing!!! you have great talent!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 20:38 PST
Comment/Review:
Adored this fic! All of it was so convincing. I could feel both their pains and frustration. The chapter Misommunications was masterfully done. Excellent!!! You are an excellent writer and know your Vegita and your Bulma. Congratulations on such a great fic.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny!!!love the way you woven the characters together and seeing a different side of vegeta
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 09:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow chi chi is a coniving bitch!
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Reviewed By: aaMY On: July 03, 2005 20:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
THE ST0RY WAS BEAUTiFUL ! THE BEST i`VE READ S0 FAR ..
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: April 14, 2005 07:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there! I just read this story again for what has to be nearing the fiftieth time and I was just amazed once more at how truly wonderful your talents are. Your stories are downright therapeutic; there's no better remedy to alleviate stress levels after a hard day / week / month and I just wanted you to know that your writing has truly touched my life. Thanks for all your hard work and may you never lay that proverbial pen to rest ^_~
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: October 17, 2004 15:02 PDT
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I still prefer the original version that was posted on FFnet. The part with Gohan and Trunks was pricless.
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Reviewed By: Samantha Delier On: August 15, 2004 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD! It is like so like good. You know, like, if you like, wrote a book, like it would like be like sooooo COOOOOOOOOOOOL! LOVE ya hun! OH yeah, Vegeta definitely has a unique ass. Oooo, I'm lovin' it.
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Reviewed By: Milly Langhern On: August 15, 2004 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, sort of rushed, loved characterization. Oh yeah, Vegeta's hot. Trunk is too. ;)
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