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| "Shattered Dreams, Broken Soul, Unbound Love" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] | Reviewed By: Jesse Michael On: July 11, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderful i love you somemuch(starts crying) | Reviewed By: Spryte [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 16:25 CDT
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~sticks tongue out at Eoko, then gives Squall-sama cookies~ Hmph. I made a piccy of Spryte: http://fanart.lionking.org/imgarchive/FanArt/shadowfaerie_98/SpryteNew.gif
In the game, Navi wasn't that bad. At least she did that targeting thing, and I think her purpose was to help new players. Plus, I heard one theory was mute so she'd do all the talking but then I also heard another one that Link and Zelda were twins. In the manga Impa 'sealed away Zelda's consciousness' awakening her as Sheik. So he could still be his own person, just two minds in one body thing like Yami and Yugi.
Enough irrevelent stuff though. Eoko, Spryte never cries, (well, almost never,) so there! Ack! Looks like that rxcspideyb person's trying to compete with us, Eoko! Grr! ~huggles Squall-sama~ At least I'm still first to review when there's a new chapter. :P I don't know whether to support Mina or protect you from her. | Reviewed By: mina tsukiyono On: July 06, 2003 13:53 CDT
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You know I really love your story, I don't have to tell you that, but there is one thing that I don't like...(OMG are you shocked)...WAITING!!! It's like reading a book and then having it taken away for weeks or months at a time after every chapter. lol. ^_' Never EVER stop writing or I'll hunt you down and hurt you until you start again!!! ^.^ | Reviewed By: rxcspideyb On: July 05, 2003 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best zelda fanfic ive ever read! i must have the next part. and yes cliffhangers are a bitch XD till next review caio! | Reviewed By: Guess who's back!!! Back again!!! Eoko! On: July 02, 2003 03:32 CDT
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Okay! Yeah Spryte, me again! Hiya Squall-sama! Who luvs ya?! I do a'coarse! Yes, I loved this chapter too. Did I cry? I bet you're wondering that hmmm? No I didn't, not even a sniffle of a 'oh, sad'.... it's true. And gore never gets me. I think 'R' rated horor movies are funny. I laugh all the time at them... and no I didn't laugh at poor sweet Sheik. So, I saw that little, 'he wondered why he had silver hair and not golden' so I'm expecting an explanation on the subject soon. I'm thinking there are a lot of spelling mistakes in my review, as it's 1:36AM right now and I can't even really make out the screen anymore. Is that bad? Anyway, I like this fic. It's angsty but I ain't bawling, and it yaoi with is like a little slive of heaven. I heart you Squall-sama, but not in a you and your lover way... that would be wrong. Yes, I can just picture that cringe I drew on your face... Yep *is looking up at the sky* I could have a sky in my computer room... you don't know... I'm that sleepy. Well, it's fabulous! And another thing! About that cliffhanger! Sorry buddy-boy but I happy to like cliffhangers. They make me SMILE! Yep... *toddles off to bed* | Reviewed By: Ecchivalentine On: July 02, 2003 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read any fics yet with such outstanding overall quality. The set-up in the beginning was a tiny bit longer than necessary, but overall very well-written. Some punctuation, spelling, homonym-style errors, as well as a most remarkable confusion about commas. Fortunately, it doesn't interfere with the story much. I'd be more than happy to help you out with some proofreading, as well as minor style pointers. Overall, your personification and imagery is fantastic. I can't wait to read the ending! | Reviewed By: EOKO: Spryte's arch ENEMY On: July 02, 2003 02:10 CDT
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Kay Kay! I knowwwwwww I haven't read chapter 10 yet BUT! Yes But! I did read Spryte's reviews. Oh yes yes I did. I alomst had a heart-stopper when I thought I lost Squall-sama's fic! I did, it's true! I know I know! I'm so bad for actaully forgetting where it was in the first place! But I have it bookmarked, on the UPSTAIRS puter! Oh! I am so doing a doujinshi entitled 'The War or Eoko and Spryte'... Oh oh! Oh Squall-sama! You-hoo! Remember that pic I sent you... Spryte is to me as Navi is to Link! Yeah, you know the truth! AHAHAHA! Plus, who has more in common with you, me or her? You know what I'm talking about. *wiggles eyebrows* Yeah. I thought so....
PS
Luv ya Spryte | Reviewed By: Eoko On: July 02, 2003 01:59 CDT
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Nice little side thing with the Gundam boys. Well, I totally freaked! I did! I did! I thought I lost your fic! I was like, "Where is it? What sire is it on?! Eoko, how could you lose it?!" So, I did a google serach for your name and I FOUND IT! Obviously, cause I couldn't exactly be praising chapter 9 if I hadn't. Well, I haven't exactly praised it yet, but I will! Now, poor Sheik, but still no tears! It's amazing! I cry at everything! I don't know why I'm not. Now, I keep going, oh, Link will save the day, Link will save Sheik and everything will be perfect, but, this fic isn't some Disney fairytale... or, hope they wouldn't do these things in a Disney fairytale O_O Could you imagine? *shudder* Forget I mentioned it.... you're laughing again aren't you? Eh, that's okay... So, I am going to read chapter 10 now, because, well, it's there right? It deserves to be read and appreiciated.... I hope this is long. When the reviews are long you know it's from me, and the name. The name kinda gives it away too doesn't it? Ok,I really will read it now! | Reviewed By: Spryte On: June 25, 2003 20:27 CDT
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^-^ See! More ppl have reviewed! ~huggles~ No sign of Eoko, looks like I'm still you're biggest fan-girl. :P | Reviewed By: Dendie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 13:18 CDT
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Like your fic. Wouldn't worry about flames too much. I think yuo scared off all the flamers! ^O^^o^ It is a cool fic. Bye!!
Warning: My reviews make no sense :} | Reviewed By: mina tsukiyono On: June 23, 2003 12:54 CDT
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Sorry I didn't review for chapter 9, I've been a little busy and didn't have time to read. This story keeps getting better! I stll LOVE your writing and please don't stop yet!!! Cliffhangers do suck, yes they do, very much, don't do it again. ^_^ lol Keep the chapters coming!!! | Reviewed By: YukiKoori On: June 22, 2003 15:44 CDT
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Wow! This is really, really amazing story... very dramatic. Very shiny. (don't yell at me, shiny is just my word to descibe all the things i enjoy) I can't wait to read more, that was an evil, evil cliffhanger! Stuff like that can cause violence among the masses! So please, for the sake of your loyal readers (and your muses, except perhaps Wufei-chan) write more! We await with baited breath!
(Koori) | Reviewed By: YukiKoori On: June 22, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I really like this story (i'd use more articulate words but I can't spell... anything) Instead I'll have to use my (patented) word, SHINY! This is a really *shiny* ficcie! | Reviewed By: Spryte On: June 21, 2003 22:19 CDT
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^-^' It's only been two days, don't worry. Anyway, ppl, hurry up and review. Poor Link & Sheik, ~huggles~ | Reviewed By: Spryte [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! :P I read some of your ff8 fics too, but I didn't recognise the other series', and I still don't really understand Gundam Wing...
~sticks tongue out at Eoko~ I saw this fic first, on ff.net (which lately isn't so good, so many fics yet so few are good, and most of them copy eachother) so there. :P ~huggles Squall-sama~ | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] |
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