| "Life With Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 17:29 CDT
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Nooo! I spent most of the day enjoying this fic but this seems a kind of strange way to end. I hope you've not abandoned it! Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and that I hope that you will continue it eventually. Thank you for writing this touching and realistically sweet story! ~~sylenctone
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Title: Chapter 107
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 04:25 CDT
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I'm SO glad you updated! ^^ I hadn't had time before this to get back to reading but am I ever glad I did now. Hilde is just looking for trouble the way she's acting. Even though Duo checked the supports before that dosn't mean it'll always be safe to enter those rickety old sheds. She's a stubborn woman, which makes her a great character in its own right. She just better hope that her own stubborness doesn't lead to a short end to her story. Your style is still as wonderful as ever and I can only hope there'll be more Heero and Duo next chapter. Of course, Hilde at the moment seems to take priority, putting herself in dangerous situations, lol. I look forward to your next update and am curious to see what happens.
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Title: Chapters 1-106
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 01:51 CST
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Wow, great story but I'm sorta wondering if you've abandoned it or not. It's been almost two years since the last update and I checked your personal website as well. On your website it's even less updated than here! :P Like I said though, this story is beautiful. Truly a tale of friendship, realization, and love. ^^ Very well written and thought out, your plot is entertaining, realistic, and intriguing. I only wish there was more to read and that the story actually ended properly. I do hope you still write this story and that there are updates on the way! I'll be looking out for any signs of an update. Oh, and I love the Heero and Duo love scenes so far. They're very tactful and enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 04:27 CDT
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Woohooo!! *huggles Calicokitty* That was good, much better response from Heero... a mutual thing that Duo helped smooth out in the morning. Not like the first time they tried and Duo was the only one to receive. I think that anaylzing it is something Heero should do but not so intensely, it'll help him understand what triggers his trainning and ruins their 'mutual' sexual trysts. Gosh I love this arc!!! And I've missed it!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 03:58 CDT
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101-"Maybe bathroom renovation should be their next home improvement project." *snickers* sorry I haven't reveiewed as of late ...alot stuff going on, but I'm here and I promise to be more involved as like permits me so.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
tha story was slow to start but once u beat that traffic the story's got flavour and lot's of hidden spices.the grammar is good, could be a little more descriptive but other than that i'm hooked, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 17:10 CDT
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Yes! Heero is startign to get over his problem. Thats great! I really liek how the story is going. Keep up the great work! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nhaia On: October 01, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guaao, Long time no read, pardon, no see!!! :) .. Someone is going to sleep in the sofa.. Well Like always, i love read your fic, in particular this one...Please no desapeare this way...thank you for your wonderfull writing.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 12:01 CDT
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Whoot! I just got done reading this (as I've been doing for the last three days) and this is awesome! I want you to update again soon, so that I have a reason to keep reading! Okay? Okay. Bye now, have a nice day!
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Reviewed By: windychan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 00:21 CDT
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Meep! Poor Rick... while I do feel sorry for Hilde, what with facing the possibility that the treasures her family had gathered is all crap... ow. Poor guy. I hope things work out okay...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:51 CDT
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 13, 2005 13:49 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I wish I could write more but I'm in a hurry.My Mom is sick and I have to go stay with her ..So I'm doing a mass review and I'm sorry if this is posted in more than 1 chapter of your story, But like I said I am in a hurry ...I have read your story or story' and enjoyed It or them and can't wait till your next update. So Please update again soon so I can read more...
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Reviewed By: nhaia On: September 12, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short, it's too short!!! Why??? I want some action here, I suppose is comming. Well for now is good because I know you have forget this fic. Thanks for that...
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: February 09, 2005 00:29 CST
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i'm so glad you updated!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:30 CST
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Hey, I must have special powers! Just yesterday, I sent myself a message to check with you on this fic and ta da - here's a new chapter! Wow - maybe I should go buy a lottery ticket... It was also very creepy that the description of the inside of those sheds is frighteningly close to what my bedroom looks like right now. :( It's like Duo was thinking, how things tend to snowball when you keep putting them off, yanno? Jeez, now I really feel guilty. *Thinks about cleaning her room.* Good intentions have to count for something, don't they? Anyway, I'm glad you're sticking with the fic, kiddo!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 08, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update sooner this time and keep up the wonderful job!
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