| "Life With Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: February 07, 2005 20:29 CST
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Yay! you have finally updated your story. It's been quite a while since last I've read your story, I hope it wont be to long for you to update again.. until next time Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:48 CDT
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sorry a bout the spelling errors, it's kinda early ... 'only things that'... comparisons not compassions lol have a great weekend and update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, I've finally caught up! 99 chapters! oh boy and it was fun read. I appreciate the gradual development of their relationship and I'm happy that Duo realized that it was unfair to leave next steps up to Heero. Hmm and the chapters that were rated 'R' ummm They didn't seem to be such, i mean in comparison to the others the only that seem to up the rating was the mention of 'handjob' and need to clean up after said action... so in otherwords, me being the hentai that I am, I had thought that there would be more *coughs* details *ducks, runs and hides, then peeks back at Calic0* Man I loved the earlier compassions between Duo, heero and the others with Alice in wonderland *smirks* *i'm skipping around here but also i couldn't believe Q's thoughtlessness and how he chose to ignore the ever wise Tro-chan when he reminded him that they should have 'called' first, reminding him of what Duo had said before because it was upsetting and discomforting that their friends would be so thoughtless. I guess Q doesn't listen. i wonder how they, particularly Q, responded to Heero leaving and Duo behavior afterwards? did Q even notice? I'm sure Tro-chan did. It has been a pleasure reading this story and man I can wait to see future development and how they handle inventory the mess in the sheds and how heero handles 'lena's reaction to his relationship with Duo... shoot how their friends handle/preceive it period. can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: PAATTY 40 On: August 11, 2004 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really feel bad for them I sounds like there is a lot to do...
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: July 26, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great. Please up date soon !!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 22:47 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 08, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, emotionally. it made me cry. that's so sweet, and sad too.oh It's so lovely. I thikn it's beautiful..This is really good. I mean *really.* I could never write like this, with so much feeling. Great job! OH! I love this story Simply adored this chapter, Two thumbs WAYWAY up! *wink*
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: July 07, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter! waiting for more!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Maldoror_unlogged On: July 06, 2004 22:55 CDT
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Good thing Duo's got some emotional savvy. Guess their back to taking it slow. Man, how long until Heero can finally participate fully?!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:34 CDT
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Ahhh, first times are always a bit complicated...and these guys have so much baggage it's just scary. I have the feeling that Heero's problems are far from over...damn! *whimper* Next chapter? Pleeeease?
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 21, 2004 17:32 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ahh I really enjoyed this chapter..Please update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 08, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm ok love this chapter..But need longer chapter's..More,More,More..Update again soon.TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:56 CDT
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Slightly bittersweet ending...but I have this lovely visual of this half-eaten bowl of ice-cream slowly melting, completely forgotten...*sigh* Hope this loosens Heero up a bit!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 31, 2004 23:33 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just wanted to say how much I LOVE this story! It is so good that I just had to let you know what a terrific job you are doing and I CAN'T wait to find out what happens next!!! Don't keep me in suspense!! How do you guys write so many fanfics with out getting writers block? Don't you just hate writers block I really don't know how you guys do it... but I'm glad you guys do..I don't know what everyone else thinks but I love this story and I want more please...Update again soon..
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Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: May 28, 2004 09:12 CDT
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I love this story SO much, write more soon, will ya? your fans are waiting... and I am one!! ^__^
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