| "Life With Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: KaollaSu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2003 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay you wrote more!! However it was kinda sorta short. ^_^ Keep up the good work and please write a new chapter for Winning Duo & Life with Heero soon! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: May 10, 2003 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like there is trouble in paradise. I hope that you write again soon and make everything better. You had better not leave them hanging like that. I cannot wait until you write more.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: joe On: May 07, 2003 04:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
-.- ummm, I'd have to say that the PDA chapters were probably the worst in the series. Who the hell gets "disapointed" about a kiss in real life because it was done in front of people? Not very realistic. And is it just me or are the chapters getting shorter and shorter? Writers block? O.o? |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 02:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD.
So Heero was disguising his feelings, Duo will be so relieved when he hears that.
I'd love to hear what the midnight conversation will bring.
Good luck,
ALice |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Duo's having public displays of affection problems. It's a little weird to read about Heero asking for a kiss though. |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 05:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was fearing you had lost interest in this serie (almost ten days without a new part), but it was worth the wait. I can't wait to see Heero in "Mission PDA" |
Reviewed By: bkerrmom On: April 16, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I keep telling you, I love everything you write! Heero's first PDA's hmmm looks like an area for bumped noses or for some angst to slip in. I love warm and fluffy also so a good reaction is great also. It's your story so I sit here waiting to see what you come up with next. |
Reviewed By: blizzardangel On: April 16, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on heero!!! you can do it!! kiss, kiss, openly kiss, you can do it!!! lol, I waited for you to post this next chapter and though their short, I love them and couldn't be any happier. Continue and post soon! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What happened w/ Tanaka?
Heero angsting over public displays of affection. ::hee hee:: |
Reviewed By: Fenella On: April 13, 2003 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh! i love this so much! its so cute and wonderful and adorable! please add more soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: kat On: April 09, 2003 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fic. I love it cause you have heero and i would think that he is hard to live with and Realeana should go to Duo he seeems so good to tslk to . |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 07, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an intriguing fanfic. I've been reading this for a while now and have only just caught up with it.
I like the style and the characterization -- Heero especially. He's always the most difficult to write, in my opinion. I also like how you've written Hilde and Relena; very nicely done. Thank you, thank you for not giving in to blatant Relena bashing. Hilde's tentative friendship with Heero is really well-done, too. And Heero and Duo taking care of Jennie's kids...cutest thing ever! Ahhh. ^_^
I especially am enjoying the length of this fic. I love it...very realistic. I like how we've been able to observe Heero and Duo's deepening relationship over the course of so many little adventures. Very enjoyable.
This fic is really nice. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 04:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, nice. Anxious Heero!
Go HEERO, GET HIM!
Alice. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heero the business man, making a presentation. How not Heero...
Please, please, have the next chapter be about the presentation. It would really be worth reading! |
Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello again. You're probably sick of me by now, but i have to say the last two chapters were great again. Heero's going to try to prove to himself that he can make it and they are taking their relationship slowly and sweetly. I'll be waiting for more.
James |
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