| "Life With Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: August 20, 2003 21:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me again! New chapters since the last time I checked! Keep on writing, this arc is great! |
Reviewed By: Mess On: August 04, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved how you made
this story, it was really good and i really loved
reading it, i just hope that you do the next part soon
im really looking forward to reading your new parts
or chapters. Plz do hurry! |
Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i am so glad you finally updated. This story is so good and worth the wait of reading more, i just love it so much. I am looking foward for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 00:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah new chappie!
Very Good!
I wonder what it will take for Heero to break through his training.
Alice. |
Reviewed By: Yira On: July 31, 2003 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*tacklepounce* Yay!!! I was wondering if you were stuck on this story or what. But you got another chapter out. yay!!!
I got the translation wrong on "nan demo nai" though I don't see how >.< Grrr..ah well. It's set right now >.>;; That's all that matters...heh "nan demo nai" right? Just a slight misinterpretation...*pouts* I can't believe I forgot what that meant!! >. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is still the best I hope to read more soon please update faster!!!! your a great writer.... |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 10:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT DATE!
I hope you write more soon, they really need to get passed that training!
Alice. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 24, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG J IS SUCH A BASTARD. Poor Heero and Duo. Can
we have some more fluff of some type in the next chapter? I want to know if they will be okay. I want to know what is going to happen, please write again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Kit On: June 23, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don;t know how to keep people on the edge of their seats. that is interesting, very interesting. I cant wait for more. |
Reviewed By: kit On: June 16, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very interesting indeed. I love how this is all turning out. to think, i jsut started reading you fic yesterday, and already i am caught up. you need to write more. |
Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: June 14, 2003 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, nice fic! I really like the addition of Heero's and Duo's respective crisises, so you managed to have more realism than just the romance. It's so CUTE! I hope you write more! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 08, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aha -- now I realize why Heero was being so "reluctant". ^____^ He seemed out of character at the time, but now it makes sense. ::smacks self:: I'm a dope. I apologize.
I'm surprised Duo drove where he did after picking up the ice cream. Surprised and amused. Greatly anticipating the next part. Ahh, such a cute series. |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 03:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great, I'd never have guessed Duo'd take him bowling.
I wonder what he's thinking of though. Also, I think that any team with both Heero and Duo on it would do very well.
Another great chapter so, please, please, please write more soon,
Cheers,
Alice. |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 01, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Heero was a little out of character when he complained to Duo about the complexities of bowling. Heero's the Perfect Soldier -- wouldn't he have dealt with more complicated things during the war? It didn't make much sense to me that he would complain about something like that. However, it also could show how Duo's presence has changed Heero's cold, computer-like mentality.
Despite that, I enjoyed this chapter very much. The entire series is very well-crafted. I am looking forward to reading the next part. |
Reviewed By: Alice Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 03:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, very nice date. Can't wait to see what happens in part two.
Also I'm very curious if they go to earth and how the others will react.
Also I really want to know if Heero got the Tanaka deal.
Going GREAT,
Alice |
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