| "From the inside" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 10:31 EST
Comment/Review:
*cries happily*
BABY!! BABY BABY BABY!!
I LOVED IT!! What else can I say? |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sad to see this ending, it was SUCH a wonderful story!! This final chapter was just precious...I LOVED Vegeta!! I'm so glad that all the trauma and unhappiness that our beautiful couple have lived through are over, and they can now live happily ever after!!! Looking forward to the epilogue! |
Reviewed By: Rita On: March 14, 2003 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic please continue updating as soon as possible. It is so different and has held my attention. Please update soon please please please. |
Reviewed By: classifed On: March 08, 2003 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah death to the sick bastards!!!! I hope the baby is okay |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 02:26 EST
Comment/Review:
Hell yeah!!! The entire family got revenge! Go Leilani! Go Gohan! Go Vegeta! And GO TRUNKS!!!
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read about the baby. I'm so glad the ordeal with those bastards is now over. Dead men can't hurt anyone ever again. Great ending to such a terrible situation.
I wanted to mention this chapter was much better in spelling and grammar than the ones I kinda talked about before. I just wanted to tell you I thought you did a really good job. ^_^
I can't wait for more! I have to see the baby! What are they going to name it! What gender will it be?! I have got to know! Update soon! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I want to know if it is a boy or a girl? Please wite more and keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:35 EST
Comment/Review:
eeeegads!! why didnt my first review work? *growls*
I TRIED to say that you kick mad ass ^_^
HURRY YOUR BUTT UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER! I WANNA SEE THE BAAAAAAAAAABY!!
love ya!
AND HURRY! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANCE! PURE BRILLIANCE!!
Ok.. this review is for all the chapters, since I JUST read them all >_ |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 07, 2003 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update soon the story was great lellian kick some ass and trunks and vegeta |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: March 06, 2003 10:47 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! NOOOOOOOOOO not goten!!!!this is a great fic ......oh i just can't wait for the next update....keep up the grear work!!!! |
Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 17:08 EST
Comment/Review:
why? why did you do that?!! must you suck all the happiness out of this fic? AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! WHY ARE YOU SO CRUEL?!?!?!?!?!
anyway, love it,keep going. |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 04, 2003 18:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea you have to make somebody come in the story yea where the hell is lellian when you need her or trunks. but you must update soon |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 18:08 EST
Comment/Review:
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!! O_O THE BABY!!! TRUNKS!!! SOMEBODY!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?!?!? Where's Leilani? Make her come in and beat the shit outta all the assholes with ki blasts!!! That'd be a great way to break it up!!! O_O AHHH!!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! NUUUU!!!! X_x
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! ;-; *cries* PLEASE!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 00:03 EST
Comment/Review:
You can't do that to them!!! Don't be a total bitch SSM!!! Haven't you done enough to poor Trunks and Goten?! Goten has to have this baby! You can't let this happen!!! Someone just has to save him!!! Maybe it'll be his daughter! Leilani has been training with Goku and Vegeta, I'd be willing to bet she could kick their asses to HFIL!! You just have to update ASAP!!! I've gotta know what's going to happen!!! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: charpter 12 On: March 02, 2003 13:22 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh God!!! Don't let that happen! Trunks has still his ki collar and so he can't help. Please don't be that cruel. I still tremble when I imagine what they are going to do to our pregnant Goten. I don't think they can handle a further rape. And I hope the little Firefly stops blaming Trunks for what he did. Maybe one day she will understand what happend. |
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