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Reviewed By: Sara On: January 20, 2003 19:45 EST
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WOW!
Cool story!
Poor Trunks! I hope all will go well and that nothing serious happened to Goten... and that those mosters who hurted Trunks meet slow and painfull death...
And I hope Vegeta will be a little more supportive... after all Trunks is HIS son but he seems to ignore him while he's nice and caring toward Leilani... I think Trunks really need help to deal with all that happened to him and since Goten is pregnant Vegeta should really try be more helpfull... |
Reviewed By: Zion On: January 17, 2003 01:25 EST
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damn them for showing up in front of trunk's like that=/
Well i await the yaoi lemon=D in the next chapter...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 20:09 EST
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WAAHH!!! You can't leave me in suspense like this!!! IT'S CRUEL!!! *bawls*
Please update right away!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 16, 2003 11:33 EST
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OH, KILL THEM, KILL THEM!!!!!!!!! How can they dare to walk over him like nothing happened. I think they should pay for it, before they try something that disgusting again. Please write on. I can’t wait to know what happened in the shopping centre and especially what will happen next. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 03:16 EST
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Dang you've been updating fast!!! I can't believe those jerks would have the nerve to approach Trunks while he was sober! He should have just blasted them to HFIL! Poor Goten...Gohan slidding on the kitchen floor cracked me up for some reason. It was just too easy to see. And then Vegeta...He's something else. Well, I sure hope you keep working on this because I want to see what happens when Goten finds out and what the baby's going to be like, so keep hurrying! ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Kia On: January 14, 2003 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey...I've found you! Heh..actually, I'm not really a Truten fan nor a mediaminer fan *lol*, but I remember reading 'When Love and Hate Collide' at the Hotel (when it was still up, that's so long ago *sob* don't you miss it too?) so yeah, I was really happy to find it here. :P Sorry, I was too lazy to leave a review on that since I was eager to follow up and read the sequel to it...
I particularly like it that you've finished that story (pet peeve of mine *grins*), and the ending was nicely done too. *nods* It wrapped things up neatly.
Nice...you write well. I like the way the story is shaping up...heh, I normally don't read Truten, but I'm reading yours...^_^ It's a little sappy at points for me, but that's my personal opinion (my fav is Vegeta, what do you think I _like_ *giggles)
Love the last bit about the princes of the house of vegeta fainting...*lol*
Anyway, hope to see the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 17:02 EST
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XD LMAO!!!!
"What's the deal with Saiyan princes that faint?"
XD I LOVE THAT LINE!!! That is now gonna be one of my favorite lines!!! ROTFLMAO!!! XD That was such a great chappy!!! I hope everything goes all right for Goten and everything...um...I just am still REALLY curious to know exactly HOW Goten is going to...um...get his child out...but I'm praying that it's nothing too...erm...gross...you know what I mean...
O_o;; So many weird ways this can be done...oi...
LoL...and I'm kind of scared to know!!!
^_^;; Guess I'll find out soon enough!!! This was such a good/funny chapter, I especially loved when Vegeta fainted at the end and then there was that line...LOL!!! Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P. mm'kay??? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 13, 2003 13:08 EST
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I can imagine the sweet butterfly outfit and when Vegeta faints. It is so cute. How you describe her…I want to adopt Leilani. She must be the cutest girl of the world. I love her! And it will be interesting how Goten can be pregnant. I mean it will be difficult for him to get the baby out of him >grin |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 01:32 EST
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I was getting so into the fic and then that chapted ended!!! That is just so wrong!!! Poor Goten. He must really love Trunks to want to go through the hell of having kids for him. That is sooo sweet. ^_^ In the last chapter's notes, you mentioned that this fic may be too twisted for readers. Well, if it's too twisted for them to understand then they don't need to read it anyway. Personally, I love really involved plots and you're good at that along with giving lots of Trunks/Goten goodness. ^_^ I can not wait for more because I know you have some more drama planned. Goten has to find out about the rape sooner or later. Oh, I like the flashbacks and partial amnesia. The whole post shock syndrome thing works really, really well here. I just hope you update quickly! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 22:28 EST
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OMG!!!!
Another wonderful chappy!!! ...Although I'm almost afraid to find out exactly how Goten is going to be able to have children...
O_o;;
Guess I'll just have to wait and see!!! ^_^;;
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Zion On: January 10, 2003 17:51 EST
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That was so sweet...i loved this edition to the story. plz write more !!!!!!!!! i crave more yaoi goodness ^_^ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 06:55 EST
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:bitch-slaps Trunks for not being honest w/Goten:
Oh well. If everyone told the truth all the time we wouldn't have drama and soap operas would we! I just hope everything gets aired ASAP! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 01:18 EST
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That is soo friggin' wrong!!! To end a chapter like that!!! How could you?!? Gosh that sux!!! I want to know what's going to happen! Poor, poor Trunks!!! And sweet Goten doesn't suspect a thing! Wow! Update soon!! And I mean SOON!!! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Zion On: January 06, 2003 20:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!plz write MORE!!!!!! damned rapists.... |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 19:29 EST
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AHHH!!! NOOO!!!
THOSE EVIL HOTTIE-RAPING BASTARDS!!! *Kills them all!!!* Didn't they cause our poor Tru-chan enough pain as it is?!?!? ARRRGGG!! *kills them even more even though she already killed them!!!* GAHH!!!
Poor Trunks...Poor Goten...I hope everything works out!!! Great sequel so far!!! Please write more! ^_^
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
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